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第三讲你不了解的写作写作是纸上的行走,是用笔在纸上和读者们交流,和读者们说话,好的写作是用心的,好的写作其实就是“有话好好说二-学生常见问题.不会写英语作文?1对该文体特点不了解,不知道写什么内容------多读范文•・由于英语词汇语法问题造成的语言问题-----------从词,句,语法三个角度分别解决例子:主语+谓语I listenedcarefully.主语+谓语+宾语I loveyou.主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语I give you mydictionary.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补You askme toread it.主语+系动词+表语She ismy grandfather..你为什么写不出好的英语作文?2・中国同学的问题思维一一中文一一英文写作模式切断思维和中文的连接,让思维,而不是表述思维的中文留在脑海中,是进行英语写作的第一步•比如他的笑话把我给逗死了翻译Chinglish:His jokemade melaugh todeath.I wasquite amusedby thejoke hejust told.翻译我是很被逗乐被那个笑话他刚告诉“sb”s sonwasborn,这是一个被动语态,用中文的被动来表达就是“某人的儿子被生了”纠正这个习惯就要随时在英语写作训练上注意克服对中文的依赖习惯是由于重复而产生的,也只能通过更多次的重复去消除掉你练习中文,使用中文已经很长时间了,中文对你来说是一种强势的语言,思维到中文最轻松,最快捷,最不假思索而我们就是要把这个不假思索的过程停止,重新去审视,阻断和剥离掉中文的影响,才能让写出的英文句子地道,纯净,优美.阅卷老师阅卷时会看哪些东西呢?3他们会看你文章的开头与结尾,然后是第二段的第一句话,你文章中用到的一些逻辑连接词最后大略地看看字数、拼写、语法等细节,打分.作文的内容要不要写的很有主见很有思想呢?4思想这个东西,根本不是高考英语作文的给分点,写的越简单直白、积极向上就越好.高考英语满分作文的胜在哪里?什么是提纲类作文呢?5高考英语满分作文一般胜在行文清晰、准确、简洁三点,这就是公认的英语满分作文“黄金三定律)提纲类作文,就是题干中先给我们个写作背景,然后列出几点汉语/英文提示(也就是提纲)考生根据题目中的背景和提示的内容,再加上部分补充,最后写成的作文
(三)十句作文法第一段记叙,写对题目中对你要求的东西,写背景,写事件需要2句话第二段议论,是一句总起句,加三句论点,每一句论点后面加一句论据第三段升华,大约是句的篇幅把文章提升至世界/社会/国家,1-2或者个人成长的层面如此,共十句当你有了这么一个详细大纲,就可以继续往下写怎么写?答,套用万能句式+套用逻辑词+填空我们举个例子……(2016天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿()1回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
(2)谈谈收获或感情;
(四)三段式作文
1.开头段问候+自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的视情况而定前三条都是可以不出现的(比如跟你的好友写信我觉就不需要自我介绍)下面就是套路啦问/矣*Howare youdoing这两者差不多•How is everything going自我介绍考虑到大多数全国卷的作文,主角都叫李华,我们可以这样写(使用了同位语从句,和定语从句,非常抢•I amLiHua,a17-year-old boycurrently studyingin XXXschool.镜的句子)•I amLiHua,who...()•As thevice monitorof ourclass,I...•I amLiHua,the chairmenof the Student Unionof XXXMiddle School.写信背景这一部分其实是比较多样性的部分•I heardthat...•My teachertold us...•I aminformed that...•I learnedthat...•I readin yournewspaper/micro-blog/website that...都属于比较基本的内容当然这些是无法解决所有书信体作文的写作的,这•You saidin yourlast letterthat...就需要同学们在不断地练习中形成自己稳定的写作风格举个例子比如作文背景是一个同学写信述说自己的困惑,要求作者给出安慰和建议这时候安慰部分可以这样写・Im sonyto knowthat yourehaving sucha badtime atthis verymoment.I quiteunderstand thatit isinevitablefor anadolescent/student like you tobe disturbedwith...Actually,it isnot aserious shortcoming.However,that ispossibleto overcome.写信目的•Now,I amwriting to do sth.•Now,I amwriting thisletter todo sth.•Now,I amwriting thesefew linestodo sth.对于不同类型的文章,可以有以下模板自荐信:•Now,I amwriting toapply forthe job/position/apply fbrthis program/chance感谢信:•Now,I amwriting toshow/express myheartfelt gratitudeto you邀请信:•Now,I amwriting toinvite youto jointhe..as ourguest/judge/instructor建议信:•Now,I amwriting to giveyoua hand求助信:•Now,I amwriting toask youto give me a hand/do me a favor道歉信•Now,I amwriting toshow/express myheartfelt apologyto you
2.中间段:中间段就是让大家施展自己的写作水平的主要位置啦!还是有一些小小的套路的一自荐信写自己的优势•There arefour mainreasons whyI amfit fbr the positionjob.To beginwith,...Moreover,...Finally,...•I havethree mainadvantages,First andforemost,...Additionally,...Last butnot leastI havethe confidencethat Icanhandle thejob.Firstly,Secondly,...Thirdly,...感谢信写对方对你所做的事••When II justcannot helpthinking of you/what youhave donefbr me.It wasso kindofyouto...Besides,you...Actually,I willalways rememberconsidering that...Nothing willundermine ourmemories andfriendship,and I willcherish themforever.-邀请信描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、地点、时间、参加者等••Here aresome detailsfbrtheactivities.To beginwith,...Moreover,...Whats more,...Finally,...建议信给对方的具体建议••There areseveral simplesuggestions for you.To beginwith,...Moreover,...Whafs more,...Finally,...•Immediate andeffective actionmust beput intopractice.First andforemost,...Additionally,...Last butnot least,...•The followingsuggestions carriedout,things wouldprobably becomemuch better.Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...求助信写清楚具体需要帮助的事项••I wishyou wouldbe sokind asto giveme somesuggestions/help on the followingproblems.To beginwith,・•.,which hasannoyed mefbr quitea longtime.Moreover,fbr personallyI lackthe verybasic experienceon thismatter.Finally,...•Here Idlikeyoutogiveme ahand and...Also,it wouldbe of great helpif you...常用句型•I havetrouble indoing sth.•I findit extremelyhard forme todosth•Doing sthis anotherterrible headachefbr me•Get alongwell withmy classmates/the newteacher/my parents•Arrange andmake gooduse of my everydaytime forvaluable things•Know thepurpose ofmy lifeand thedestination ofmy futurein orderto passionatelylive apurpose-driven lifeeveryday•Have troublein masteringthe advancedgrammar rulesand putthem intouse inmy speakingand writing•Find myselfmaking progressnot asfast asbefore,which hasbeen annoyingme fora longtime•Cant bepassionate andenergetic allday longso asto makeevery momentmeaningful andsplendid-道歉信写故事部分啦!•不能做某事的理由•对方能够谅解你的理由•
3.结尾段和开头一样套路-自荐信••Hopefully,you willoffer methe chance.If elected/chosen,I woulddedicate allmy energyand wisdomto thecompany/activity/club/class.Thank youfor readingmy letter/listening tomy speechin sucha hotsummer,looking forwardto your reply at yourearliest convenience./Your timelyresponse wouldbe highlyappreciated.-感谢信•on behalfofmywhole family/class/school,would like to thankyou againfbr whatyou havedonefbr me/us.My yoube blessedin everythingyour do.邀请信••We aresincerely lookingforward to your coming.My schoolmates/family andI wouldfeel muchhonored ifyoucould makeit.I wouldlike tomeet youat theschool gateand pleasedrop mea lineor givemeacall tolet meknow yourdecisionsoon.Thank you.建议信••Hopefully,these suggestionswill beofgreathelp to you.If thereiseverythingelse Ican dofor you,please letme--求助信know assoon aspossible.Tm sureyou cansolve yourproblem beforelong.•Hopefully,you willgivemeahandand offerme timelyhelp.Looking forwardto yourreply atyour earliestconvenience.•Thank youvery muchin advanceand wishyou allthe best.Looking forwardtoyourreplyatyour earliestconvenience.道歉信••Hopefully,you wouldaccept mysincere apologyand understandmy situation.•Please allowme tosay sorryagain.感觉到浓浓的套路部分了么?不过只有通过强加联系,大家才能更加熟练的掌握这些套路部分,拿到自己理想中的分数
(五)写作练习书面表达(满分分)15假定你是李华你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员请给你的留学生朋友写封邮件邀请他假如,内容Eric包括球队活动;
1.报名方式及截止日期
2.注意
1.词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2.【参考范文】Dear Eric,I wasinformed thatour schoolPing-pong Teamis lookingfor newmembers amongus students.I knowyou showgreatfancy inball games,especially ping-pong.As youknow,playing ping-pong cannot onlybuild upyour bodybut alsoshape yourcharacter.Additionally,it canhelpyou makemore friends,which isessentially beneficialtoyou.Would youliketojoin Ifso,please goto signup attheStudentUnion office,which isonthesecond floorof theTeachingBuilding.You cango thereany timethis Saturdayafternoon.If youwant meto accompanyyou,please letmeknow.Iwillbe availableany time.Looking forwardtoyourearly reply.Yours,你的英国朋友所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择“长江之行”或者“泰山之Jim旅,来信希望你能给些建议请你给他回信,内容包括:Jim.你建议的线路;1,你的理由;
2.你的祝愿3注意
1.词数不少于50;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
4.Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【思解析】体裁为建议信回信是为给所在的学校来中国旅游的学生提供建议,在“长江之行”和“泰Jim山之旅”中选择其中一条线路参考词汇和句型
1.1am delightedto learnthat...
2.Of thetwo routesgiven by...,I stronglyrecommend that...
3.immersed inthe grandeurand splendourof thelandscape
4.1promise thatthe trip,both fruitfuland rewarding,will turnout tobe amemorable experienceforyou.【参考范文】Dear Jim,Frn happyto receiveyour letterandknowyoure comingto China.Of thetwo tripsto the Yangtze Riverand MountTai,both arehighly recommended.Personally,I preferthe touralong theYangtze,the longestriver andone ofthe motherrivers ofChinese civilization.You canlearn alot aboutthehistory ofChina andChinese people.Moreover,the sceneryalong theriver isamazing,with manywell-known sightseeingspots.That*s whyI thinkthe tripalongtheYangtze willbe abetter choice.Hope youllhave agood timein China.」YoursLi Hua。