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PET作文及参考范文超级全!!PET英语作文范文及模版—Fire Preventionon Campus
1.前段时间校园火灾频发,造成生命和财产损失
2.分析火灾发生的原因
3.作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生审题概述••这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写时重点即在于此开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施第一段,主要概述;第二段,说明原因;第三段,详细论述措施【范文】Fire Preventionon CampusPeopleare alarmedby thesuccession ofcampus firesin recentyears.In eachof theseaccidents,heavy casualtieswere reported-houses were burned down,students losttheir lives,and propertieswere damaged.Faced withsuch achilling fact,people keepasking,“What onearth resultsin theserepeated tragedies11A briefsurvey of them revealsthat humanfactors stillprove tobethe leadingcauses.For example,three of these fires were causedbythe students7use ofelectric water-heaters.As studentsoftenleave theheaters unattended,the risks are ratherhigh shouldthewater in the bottleboil drywhile no one is around toturn offthepower.In othercases,fireswerealso causedby stoves,candles,cigarette butts,etc.Since mostof thesedisasters couldhave beenprevented ifproperprecautions hadbeen taken,students should be bettereducatedon theimportance andmeasures offire control.TheDo youwanna comealong”Don7t feelsurprised ifyou hearthemcoming out of themouth ofcollege students.It7s quitecommon tohearand seecollege studentsswapping informationabout thebrandsthey likeand theproducts theyuse.In fact,discussions aboutbrandnames have become one of the college studentsfavouritepastimes.They learnabout thelatest fashionfrom eachother,exchange tipsabout when and whereto getthe item,and buyit attheirearliest convenience.Z/Keeping upwith theJoneses“is theirconviction一If theJoneses haveit,how couldI havenotAbout thiscurrent mindsetof thecollege students,many peoplemayhasten toshow theirdisapproval.They IIprobably takeit to bea reflectionof the students7vanity andsuperficiality.And theymaylecture them on thevirtue ofbeing thrifty.However,I begto differ.For onething,name-brand productsareusually qualityproducts.As such,they aresomething beautiful,endurable,and reliable.The loveof beautyis commonto all/goesthe proverb;therefore,there7s nothing to blameabout thepursuitof famousbrands.For the other,college studentsare oldenough tomaketheirown decisions.Ukewise,they mustabide bythe consequencesifthey makean ill-advised one.If theylet theirpursuit ofbrands eatinto their budgetfor other more important issues,they shouldbeable tocorrect theirmistakes andkeep everythingin moderation.Sothis becomesno otherthan a good chanceto learnmanagement,isnz tit第一段思路点评本段分为两个部分,即详细陈述大学生追求和使◊用名牌的情况,以及人们对此的看法语言点提示◊1keeping upwith theJoneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人2conviction坚定的信仰、看法七Knowledge andDiploma
1.目前社会上存在这样一种说法文凭越高越吃香
2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3.你的观点审题概述・◊这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章第一段,概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法第二段,主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法【范文】Knowledge andDiplomaIt isgenerally believedthat a high diploma guarantees apromisingfuture.Some peopleidentify highdiplomas withprofoundknowledge andexceptional competence.Companies alsotend toemphasizethe academicachievement of a job candidate.Like itornot,there doesexist asocial reality-the higherdiplomas onegets,the morepopular hebecomes.On thecontrary,other peopleclaim that a highdiploma doesn7tautomatically translateinto knowledge.A diploma,in theireyes,isonly theacknowledgment of one seducational experience ratherthanaguaranteeof one s ability.Therefore,we can never measurethedepth ofonesknowledge bythe gradeofone7s diploma.Besides,many knowledgeablepeople don t haveahighdiploma.Take BillGates forexample.His droppingout ofcollege cannot denythefact thathe isoneof the world7s mostlearned men.So Imust saynooneshould everequate adiploma withknowledge,because adiploma is nothing buta proofof a shorttermstudy whilegenuine knowledgeneeds ones lifelongdevotion.第一段思路点评先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法,再点出这是◊一种社会现实语言点提示◊jobcandidate求职者、应聘者第二段思路点评详细论述文凭并不等于能力◊语言点提示◊Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢第三段思路点评使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的◊认识语言点提示◊1equate adiploma withknowledge把文凭与知识划等号2nothing buta proofofashort-term study只是短期学习的证明八The Riseof ShanzhaiCulture
1.最近兴起了一股山寨热〃
2.你如何看待山寨现象审题概述・•本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章第一段,概述方兴未艾的山寨热第二段,阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处第三段,论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点,即山寨产品的非法性【范文】The Riseof ShanzhaiCultureThe vastarray ofknockoff name-brand products,such ascellphones,DVDs,MP3players,have madeshanzhai thehottest wordof the year.Now wewear shanzhaiwatches,talk throughshanzhaicell phones,play shanzhaivideo games,use shanzhaicomputers,even watchshanzhai TVshows.Once aterm usedbeforesome electronicproducts tosuggest a copycat versionofinferior quality,shanzhai nowsuggests to many Chinesecreativityand trendiness.With themedia allover therise ofshanzhai culture,public opinionsare clearlydivided.Advocates invariablyassociate itwith innovation,stylishness,the DIYspirit,open-mindedness andpracticality,as shanzhaiproductsoften mix imitation with innovation-a similarskin butadifferent heart.The endproducts areusually morefunctional andmuchcheaper thanthe original.Besides,they respond to the marketmore swiftlyand they are moreconsiderate indesign.Thanks tothem,more peopleat thegrassroots levelcan enjoythe benefitofmodern technology.However,other people,including myself,hold morereservedattitudes towardsthe shanzhaifever.For allthe popularityit haswon,acopycatis acopycat.The mockeryof theprestige productsnotonly stealstheir profitsbut alsoupsets marketcompetition.Moreover;shanzhai productsthrive on the currentlegal loopholes.Under thedisguise of anti-dominance slogans,they makeillegalprofits byviolating intellectualproperty rightsand evading taxes.And totop itoff,the so-called innovationis onlysenseless talkastrue innovationalways faceshuge costsand potentialfailures,whileplagiarism simplybuilds successon otherpeople7s risks.第一段思路点评综述山寨热现象◊语言点提示◊...public opinionsare clearlydivided此句起承上启下的作用第二段思路点评主要阐述山寨产品的优势◊语言点提示◊1miximitationwithinnovation混淆模仿与创新2respondto themarket对市场做出反应第三段思路点评主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看◊法语言点提示◊1The mockeryof theprestige products拙劣地模仿名牌2thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣3legal loopholes法律漏洞空子4Under thedisguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下5violating intellectualproperty rights违反知识产权6evadingtaxes逃税7plagiarism剽窃、抄袭九It s Time to Stop SoftwarePiracy
1.盗版软件比比皆是
2.盗版软件猖獗的原因
3.如何打击盗版软件审题概述・•这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章第一段,概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况第二段,重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因第三段,侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施【范文】It7sTime toStopSoftware PiracyChinahas oftenbeen criticizedfor the rampant practice ofsoftware piracy.Take alook around.We operateon piratedWindowssystems,defend PCsecurity with pirated Kasperskyanti-virus programmes,process fileswith piratedMicrosoft Office,draft3D designswithpiratedAutoCAD,refine pictureswith piratedAdobePhotoshop,and studyEnglish withpirated Kingsoft7selectronic dictionariesand translators.It sno exaggerationthatpirated softwareis everywhere.The logicbehind thephenomenon issimple andclear:if apiratedcopy isavailable forjusta tinyfraction of the normalprice,not tospeak ofmany of the freedownloads online,who wouldpayfor anauthentic copyCheaper pricesaside,easy accessis anotherimportantfactor.With sucha largegathering ofpirated upgradesaround,who wouldbother tospend timeand moneysearching thestoresfor anauthorized yetoutdated versionDespitethese apparent benefits,the practiceof software piracyshould bebanned,because itrepresents unfair competition andbynature it sano-win situation.But howTwo approachesare to betaken atthe sametime:Technically,software developersshouldenhance theirantipiracy engineering,so thatcracking thesoftwareshould bevirtually impossible.And legally,the governmentshouldalso tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties,so thatviolationsshouldbecostly.第一段思路点评概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状◊语言点提示◊therampantpracticeofsoftwarepiracy猖獗的盗版软件第二段思路点评论述盗版软件猖獗的原因◊语言点提示◊1downloads online在线下载2authentic copy正版第三段思路点评阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法,包括软件商和政◊府采取的应对措施语言点提示◊tightenitsantipiracylawsandtoughenupthepenalties力口强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚十Effects ofFinancial Crisison CollegeStudents
1.金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响
2.金融危机对大学生造成何种影响
3.作为大学生,应怎样应对这种影响审题概述・•这是一篇主要论述金融危机与大学生关系的文章第一段,概述金融危机给世界造成的影响第二段,论述金融危机给大学生带来的就业、经济等影响第三段,阐述大学生面对金融危机带来的影响应提高专业技能等【范文】Effects ofFinancial Crisison CollegeStudentsSince thefinancial crisisswept theworld,the globaleconomyhas sunkinto asevere recession.It7s hardto getthrough adaywithout hearingor readingnews aboutthe devastating effects of thecrisis:A worldof companiesgo bankruptmillions ofemployees arelaidoff,high-return investmentbubbles burst,and hugesums ofloanscanneverbe retrieved.Its impacton ourdaily life can befelt inallwalks of life.College studentsinevitably fall victim tothis pervasiveslump aswell.On topof that,internships andjob vacanciesare reducedto theminimum ascompanieskeep shrinking.New graduatesfind themselveshard togeta job,not tospeak ofa satisfactoryone.What comesnext Poorstudentswill behard-pressed if they findstudent loansunavailableany more.As aresult,some evencannot affordto continuetheirstudies.Lastly,more studentsare probablyout thereanxiouslylooking forpart-time jobsnow that they have to helpcover theirexpensesin thisgloomy economy.Their innocenceand eagernessmightbe takenadvantage ofby somemalicious businesspeople,oreven criminalgang.In responseto thesethreats,we studentsmust actpromptlyand wisely.Since wedefinitely willb efacing acompetitive jobmarket,it scrucial that we submithigh qualityresumes.Therefore,we mustcommit moreto ourprofessional studies.Even dobetter,master morerelevant jobskills as a doublesecurity.Furthermore,apply forscholarships andg rants,as theseare stillavailable andwedon thave topay themback.As for the safetyissues,trust ourinstinct-there sno freelunch inthis world.Anything thatpromisesquick returnswithout muchwork isa suretrap.Stay alertandprotect ourselves.第一段思路点评概述金融危机给各行各业造成的影响◊语言点提示◊1severe recession严重衰退2devastatingeffects毁灭性的后果3go bankrupt破产4high-return investmentbubbles高回报投资泡沫5retrieved追回、挽回第二段思路点评主要论述金融危机给大学生带来影响◊语言点提示◊1slump经济萧条、不景气、经济衰退2internships实习3fallvictimto被降服、屈服于4malicious恶毒的、恶意的第三段思路点评◊阐述大学生如何应对金融危机的影响语言点提示◊注意since,therefore,furthermore等关联词的使用,使句间关系更加紧密议论型作文
1.Should CollegeStudents Liveon Campusa.有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍,因为……b.有些人喜欢住在校外,因为……c.我的看法There are an increasingnumber ofstudents whochoose toliveoff campus.Parents anduniversity administrationsunderstandablyreacted differently.They voicedconcerns aboutsecurity andthethreat ofoff-campus lifestylesgetting out of control.However,college students have their own reasonsfor theirchoices.Some studentsprefer tolive oncampus for the followingreasons.First,campus residentsare closerto classes,the library,andother resources,so they are morelikely tosucceed inc ollegeandcomplete theirbachelor7s degreein fouryears.Furthermore,Livingin adorm isa greatopportunity to meet all kinds ofnew peopleanddevelop relationshipswith them,so studentsliving oncampus aremoresociable.Last butnot theleast,living oncampus ischeaperand moreconvenient.Often times,off-campus housingis moreexpensivethan on-campus housingand whileliving oncampus,youdon thave toworry aboutmonthly rentpayments andutility bills.Some otherschoose tolive off campus because they believelivingoffcampustheyaremore independent,with moreprivacy andalot morequiet time.Living offcampus givesthem freedomfromthose dormrules and allow themto settheirown.The extraspacealso meansthat onecan probablyfind aquiet placeto studyin theconvenienceof hisown home.As forme,rma faithfulsupporter of the formergroup becauseIliving oncampus myself,have witnessedand enjoyedall thezconvenienceand happinessof doingso.To me,living oncampusundoubtedly addsan importantelement to the completecollegeexperience.
2.Directions:Suppose you are WeiQiang andyou willgraduatefrom university.Write aletter ofinquiry tothe DepartmentofPhysics,University ofWisconsin,asking for admission as a graduatestudentJuly,2007Dear Sirs,I amvery interestedin undertakinggraduate workin youruniversity.I haveread researchpapers bytwo ofyour professorsDr.Thomas Bayand Mr.Sherry Haily.T dlike tostudy undertheirguidance.In Septemberof2003I wasenrolled in the ComputerSchool oftheXYZ Universityas acomputer major.Throughout thefour yearsofstudy,I takethis fieldas oneof greatpotentials formy country.Ifeel theneed tostudy furtherin orderto developwell inthis area.I wouldappreciate receivingyour materialssuch asdepartmentalbrochure orpamphlet,andauniversity catalogorbulletin.Thank youfor yourconsideration.I amlooking forwardto yourreply.
3.Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towritean essayentitled Selfishnessin DormitoryLife.You shouldwrite atleast120words followingthe outlinegiven belowin Chinese:
1.大学寝室里自私自利的现象比较普遍
2.分析出现这种现象的原因
3.呼吁大学生改变这种不智之举Selfishness isa bitprevailing inuniversity dormitories.Somenever care about othersneeds oroffer helpto theirroommates.Some eveninterrupt othersnormal daily life byspeaking loudly,turning onthe loudspeakersand telephoningat midnight.As theonly childrenin theirfamilies,mo stof themare theapplesof their parents7eye.They havebeen spoiledand areused tobeingsatisfied.Therefore,they hardlypay anyattention followingthreereminders areof particularimportance forus students:First,learn howto usea fire extinguisher.Second,double-check candles,heaters,stoves and other electricappliances,and makesure thereareno openflames beforeleaving rooms.Lastly,do notsmoke in thedorm.第一段思路点评概述并引入下文◊语言点提示◊1止匕句What onearth resultsin theserepeated tragedies常可作为过渡句,引出下文2注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如are alarmedby,were reported,wereburneddown,weredamaged,Facedwith0第二段思路点评论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器,还有造成◊火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂语言点提示electric◊water-heaters电热水器第三段思路点评详述预防火灾的三点措施,注◊意使用连接词语first,second,lastlyo语言点提示◊take precautions采取预防措施fireextinguisher灭火器二Enhance Awarenessto Guardagainst CampusThefts
1.校园盗窃案件时有发生
2.物品被盗的原因
3.学生如何加强防盗意识审题概述••这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识【范文】Enhance Awarenessto Guardagainst CampusThefts toothersfeelings initiatively.What theycareaboutis howto meettheirown demandsand howto getwhat theyneed fromothers.Moreover,selfish peopledo notknow mutualrespect andmutualhelp arekeys toharmonious dormitorylife.Selfishness erodesyoungsters7mind andmay wellunderminetheir all-round development.Only whenwe becomerespectful andhelpfulto eachother,can wecreate ahealthy atmospherefordormitory life.
4.Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towritean essayentitled Say“Thank You“to Parents.You shouldwrite atleast150words followingthe outlinegiven belowin Chinese:
1.很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢
2.请说明原因
3.你的建议According toa recentsurvey involvingover3000undergraduates,35%of universitystudents havenever said“Thankyou“to their parents.Their parentshave doneall theycould tobringthem upin the past scoreof years,but havenever beenrewardedwith gratitude.The subjectsclaim suchreasons as follows.First andforemost,aquarter ofthe interviewedstudents regardit asparents dutytosupport themspiritually andfinancially.And it is notnecessary toexpressappreciation to their parents.However,the majorityofyoungsters areaware of theirparents7tender lovebut arenotaccustomed to saying“Thank you”.Some evenfind agenerationgap betweenthemselves andtheirparents,thus feelingreluctant toexpresstheir affectionfor theirparents.In myopinion,extending thankfulnessto ourparents isa wayofrespecting themandtheir love.We shouldexpress ourfeelings directlyandbravely,but what7s moreimportantis,we shoulddo allthatwe canto rewardthem.My FirstDay onthe CampusIstill rememberthe daywhen Ifirst cametothecollege.Being aboyof17,1was longingforanew lifeasacollege student;but,atthe sametime,I hadno ideawhat collegelife would be like.That morningwhen thebus carriedmetothe gateofthecollege.I wasso excitedthat myheart wasbeating veryfast asif itwouldleap outof mymouth.From nowon,I wouldbe astudent of thiscollege.After registration,we wereled by an instructorto thedormitory,where,for the first time,we weregoing tolive withoutparentsbut roommates.I wasso clumsythat Idid notknow howto makethe bedand fixthemosquito netIn the afternoon,I tooka walkaround thecampus togetherwithmy roommates.To thinkof studyingin sucha beautifulplace mademefeel quiteproud ofmyself.As wewere walkingalong,talking andlaughing,a voicecame into our ears,“Oh,look atthese freshmen!”Itwas ourmiddle-school-students lookingthat gaveus away.Wecontinued ourtour ofthecollege,inspecting everybuilding andeverygarden untilthe sunbegan toset.In theevening,we sattogether,talking aboutthepastand thefuture.We wereso excitedthat noone wantedto go to bed.Studying AbroadAttendingschools abroadhas manyadvantages.In the firstplace,by lookingat ourown countryfrom outside,we can best seethestrong pointsand weakpoints ofour nation and thereforewidenour visionand broadenour minds.Second,while studyingin aforeigncountry,we cantravel widely,visiting famousscenic spotsandmaking friendswith thelocal people.Thirdly wecan usetheforeign languagein ourdailylifeso thatour abilityin thesecondlanguage maybe improvedquickly.But themost importantthing inattendinga foreignuniversity isto getacquainted with the latestknowledgein science and technologyand makeuse ofthefirst-ratefacilities available.For all these advantages,it isreally worthwhiletogo abroadfor education.However,as everythinghas twosides,there arealso somedisadvantagesin attendinga foreignuniversity.The mostseriousproblem is the languagebarrier.Most ofthe studentswho arereadyto goabroad do not adequateknowledge ofthe languagespokenthere.As aresult,on arrivingthere,they willfind itdifficult tounderstandwhat theinstructors aresaying.Besides,for lack ofknowledge ofthe customsand wayoflifeofthelocal people,theymay runinto troublein dealingwith varioussituations.Therefore,misunderstandings oftenarise.Furthermore,the costof livingismuch higherthan thatin ourcountry,so moststudentshaveto findpart-tine jobsin orderto helpsupport themselves.Faced withthesedifficulties,many studentsfind themselvesunable topay fullattentionto theirstudies and some studentsmay evenfail in theircourses andlearn little.Therefore,given anopportunity to attend aschool abroad,onemust considerboth sidesofthefactors carefullybefore makinguphis mind.On the whole,it isagood thingtogo andstudy abroadparticularlywhen thesubject isvery weakor notavailable inourcountry.But ontheother hand,one mustnot losesight ofthedisadvantages.Is theExpansion ofEnrollment aGood ThingManycolleges and universities haveexpanded theirenrollmentsince
1998.The reasonsforthe expansion areasfollows.Firstly,theywant tokeep upwiththeneed ofthe jobmarket toproduce morequalifiedpeople totake upthe jobs.Secondly,theexpansionhasentitled manyhigh schoolgraduates tothe rightof receivinghighereducation.Last butnot least,it canraise theintellectual standardsofour nation.However,studies showthat thetrend toexpand hasbroughtabout manyproblems.For instance,the teachingfacilities andaccommodationcapacities ofmany collegesanduniversitiesarelimited andare unabletomeetthe demandofanever-increasingnumber ofthe newlyenrolled students.On theotherhand,theaverage qualityofthefreshmen isdeclining.In thelong run,huntingfor ajob will be atough thingforthegraduates andthat willinevitablyexert muchpressure onthe prospectsof employmentInspite of all this,I amstill confidentthattheexpansion ofenrollmentis ofgreat benefittooursociety andisagoodthing.With thedevelopment ofour nationaleconomy,the problemasmentioned abovewillbesolved ifproper measuresare taken.假冒伪劣产品
1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品fake commodities为什么会o有这种现象
2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人、社会等的危至「OHarmfulness ofFake CommoditiesNowadaysin thesociety,there areenormous fakecommodities.When you go tothe supermarket,you maybuy somefake foodcommodities.When yougotothe pharmacists,you maybuy somefake medicine.The deeproot ofthis phenomenonlies insomeone sgreed formoney.In orderto geta largeamount of money in ashorttime,theytry everymeans toproduce fakecommodities,without anyregardfor otherpeople sbenefit andhealth.Fake commoditiescan dogreat harmto bothconsumers andsociety.For example,whenaperson boughtfakemedicine,it wasuselessin curinghis diseaseand reallya wasteofmoney.Sometimesfake medicinecan evencause death.Fake commoditiesare usuallysoldin alower price.It causesunfaircompetitioninthemarketeconomy andputs thewhole societyin disorder.Don tHesitate toSay No
1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说不〃
2.为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不
3.该说不〃时不说不〃的坏处To helpthose whoare inneed isalways regardedas atraditionalChinese moral.However peoplehavetoknow wellwhatthe needis beforethe helpis offered.When theneedis justfor someminorityz sbenefit andagainst mostpeoples interests,or whenit isimmoral orunlawful,people shouldnothesitate tosay No.Otherwise theywill putthemselves intotrouble.Unfortunately,there areso manysuch examplesaround usthatpeople endup theirleadership injail orbury theirglory inshamesimply becausethey don/tz sayNo whilethey should.Some people〃〃are reluctanttosayNo infront ofallkindsof briberiesas theywant to swamptheir powerfor money.They can7t resistthetemptations ofaccumulating wealthinafast butillegal way.Fortheir owngood andtheir friend7s favor,these peoplewouldsacrifice millions of RMBYuan foran unproportionalcommission andthereforestake therefuture onscales oflaw.Other peopledon tsayNo becauseof misinterpretedfriendship andlack ofsense oflaw.They neverhesitate to do whatevertheir friendsask themtodo.They believetheyarehelping theirfriends evenwhen theyareactually violatingthe lawor localregulations.Such peoplewill alsobepunished accordingtothedegree oftheir misbehavior.Therefore,to helpis notalways doinggood.People shouldlearnto saya Nowhen the help mighthurt otherpeople7s interests./zIf youdontwanttowake upand findyou haveno pantstowear,youz dbetter putthemonin sleep/goes apopular jokeamongstudents.Obviously,campus theftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoying as they occurfar moreoften thanbefore.And it seemsthat thethieves areless choosythese days,with theirtargetsranging widelyfrom bikes,cell phones,purses,prepaid ICcards tosunglasses,bags,and evenunderwear.In short,anything thatwortha dimeis likelytobestolen.What makesstudents theeasy targetsThe reasonsare nothardto find.But Ibelieve ofallthesereasons,the lackof antitheftalertnessis themost important.For lackof alertness,the studentstendto leavethe doorsand windowswide openduring sleepatnoon orat nightin summer.For thesame reason,they IIalso leavetheirbikes unlockedbefore astore orbyaroad,or forgetto takeawaytheir personalstuff beforethey gooutofthe classroomtomake aphone call.These actsundoubtedly haveincreased theirexposuretothelight-fingered monsters.In orderto minimizepossible losses,the studentsmust stayonguard inthefirst place,as awarenessofthethefts aroundoftenmakes abig difference.To bemore specific,thestudentsshould nothideany temptingamount ofcash inthe dorm.Put itinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleave anyvaluable itemsunattended.Takethem whereveryougo.In addition,it sadv isableto developaneighbourhood watchprogramme withother studentsinthedormand neighbouringdorms.第一段思路点评陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况◊语言点提示it seemsthat此句型表示一种可能性◊第二段思路点评说明被盗原因◊语言点提示◊1What makesstudents theeasy targets此句引出下文2anti-theft alertness防盗意识3lackofalertness缺乏警惕4light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的第三段思路点评阐述如何加强防盗意识◊语言点提示注意关联词语inthefirstplace,Besides,In addition◊的使用可使行文更富逻辑性三How WillOur LifeGo on without Internet
1.网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2.很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3.你对网络依赖症的看法审题概述・•本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章第一段,侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利第二段,详述网络与人们生活的紧密度第三段,论述对网络依赖的观点【范文一】How WillOur LifeGo onwithout InternetIfasked whetherthe Internet isthegreatest discoveryofthe20th century,my answerwouldbeyes.The Internethas drawntheworld closertogether,realized countlessincredible dreams,andprovided modernpeople witha greatmany conveniencesand abrilliantlife.Today,many peoplesimply feelthey cannotlive withouttheInternet.Governments publishtheir latestpolicies anddecisionsonline forworldwide recognition.Political campaignsare oftendoneonline togain widerpublic support.Companies andenterprisesresort tothe Internetfor morebusiness opportunitiesand potentialcustomershome andabroad.Universities andresearchers turntothe Internetifthey7d seekinternational cooperationor funding.Common folkslike us also relyonthecyber worldin variousways,for communication,entertainment,banking andshopping.True,the powerofthe Internet isall pervasiveand itsmanynegative effectsare alreadyvisible.For example,Internet addictstendto withdrawtotheirown fantasy world rather thancommunicate witha realperson.Children areexposed toonlinepornography andviolence.Internet fraudsareaneverydayoccurrence.In viewofallthis,youareadvised tousethe Internetwith wisdom.Keep itatasafe distanceand neverlose yourself.第一段思路点评综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷两个长◊句足矣第一句用if引导的条件句引出网络话题,第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活语言点提示◊has drawn...,realized,and provided此为谓语连动式的运用第二段思路点评详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系,先总述,后分◊述语言点提示◊resort to借助、诉诸、求助于第三段思路点评先陈述人们对网络的依赖,再谈对此的看法◊语言点提示◊1negative effects副作用、反面作用2addicts成瘾者、依恋者3fantasyworld虚拟世界、虚幻世界4pornography色情君寅、色情作品5fraud欺骗、诈骗【范文二】As aprimary sourceof informationas wellas anefficient meansofcommunication,the Internetoffers peoplea colourfulandconvenient life.Just byclicking themouse,wecanenjoy abrilliantand easylife thatcould notbe achievedever before:shopping,making friends,contacting relatives,looking forjobs,downloadingmusic andmovies,conducting businessdeals,and freelyairing ouropinions.For itsconvenience,theInternethas attractedpeople likemagnetsandsomepeople evenclaim thatitisindispensable.Tothem,lifecant goonwithoutit.Every daymillionsofpeople spendhourson endsurfing theInternet.They areobsessed withit somuchso thatthey forgetmany otherimportant matters.As forme,I dont approveof unrestrainedInternet reliance.Although theInternetisa giftofthetechnological revolutionand ablessingofthisinformation age,we shouldnever letit controlourlife.The Internetabsolutely doesnt meanthewholeworld tous.Instead,we shouldguard againstits negativeeffects.To thoseInternetaddicts,I wouldadd:/zSelf-control can make orbreak yourlife.With properuse,theInternetserves you;otherwise,it killsyou/
(四)Craze forCivil ServiceExaminations
1.现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2.引起此现象的原因
3.你的看法审题概述・◊本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章第一段,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因第三段,重点谈你对此的观点【范文】Craze forCivil ServiceExaminationsEvery yearhundreds ofthousands ofpeople inChina takecivilservice examsconductedat variouslevels inthe hopeof becominggovernmentemployees.Among them,college graduatesare afast-growing forcethat cantbei gnored.The crazefor beinga civilservantisnotlimited toliberal artsmajors,as itsalsogainingpopularity amongscienceandengineering students.Inthefinal analysis,this growingtrend amongthe youngstersismainly attributableto twofactors-ambitions andcomforts.On theone hand,many ambitiouscollege graduatesview theseexams asaspringboard toa highersocial status,greater powerand prestige,onwhich manyoftheirother wishesrest.On theother,as beinga civilservantgenerally meansa stableincome,enviable healthcareandpension programmes,as wellas othercomforts oflife,itsquite anappealingcareer optiontomanypeople,especially inthis ageofsluggish worldeconomy.Personally,the desiretobea governmentofficial isbeyondreproach,asthenationandthe peopledo needan injectionof newbloodinto thecivil servicesectors.The fresh-faced collegegraduates,armed withlofty ideals,new vision,and strongdrive,areundoubtedly amongthe bestcandidates.第一段思路点评第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考,第二句点◊明大学生是其中的主力军,第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的,还有理工科的语言点提示◊liberal artsmajors文科专业学生第二段思路点评先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素,再◊详细分述语言点提示◊1On theonehand...On theother起到衔接上文作用2is attributableto归因于3sluggish worldeconomy衰退的世界经济第三段思路点评重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点◊语言点提示:beyond reproach无可厚非◊五)Is itNecessary toAttend TrainingClasses
1.现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2.有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班,有些人则认为没有必要
3.你的观点审题概述・•这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章第一段,概述各种各样培训班的状况第二段,论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法【范文】Is itNecessary toAttend TrainingClassesAll acrossthe countrya greatdiversity ofcustom-made classesaremushrooming,in whichspecial trainingis providedconcerningcomputer skills,arts,sports,andotherextracurricular specialtieslikemaths andwriting.Among themlanguage crashcourses forvarioustests,such asCET,BEC,TOFEL,IELTS,GRE andso forth,are especiallynoticeablefor itswide rangeand highattendance rate.Some considerit advisabletoattendsuch classeswhile othersbelieveit unnecessary.The formerargues thatitsfar moreeffectiveto commandthese specialskills withthehelpofanexperiencedtrainer thanto workat themon theirown.They areconvinced thatthesetraining classescanmakeup forwhat isnot taughtin school,hence,more competitiveedge overtheir peers.The lattergroup ofpeople,nonetheless,criticize itasasheer wasteof resources.Theywarn thatthe qualityof mosttraining coursesis questionable,asthey aremarketed toget moneyoutofour pocketratherthangetknowledge intoour head.As faras Iam concerned,a littlebit ofsuch specialtraining doesusno harm,but toomuch ofit canonly proveto becounterproductive.Anyhow,the deprivedfree timecanbebetterinvested inrecreation atweekends,talking toan oldfriend,orsimply enjoyinga long-overdue vacation.第一段思路点评第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培◊训班雨后春笋般兴起,第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆语言点提示◊1a greatdiversity of各种各样的2mushrooming迅速扩散、增加3language crashcourses语言速成课程第二段思路点评先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点,再分别◊详述他们的看法语言点提示注意连接词语while,The former,They,The latter◊group ofpeople等的使用,强化了上下文之间的连贯性第三段思路点评辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法◊语言点提示◊1as faras Iam concerned我认为,就我而言2counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的7\Univ ersityStudentsz Pursuit of Famous Brands
1.现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌,用名牌
2.你对这种现象的看法审题概述・•这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章第一段,详述大学生热衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人们的看法第二段,重点谈你对此的看法【范文】University Students1PursuitofFamousBrands“What perfumesare youwearing Arent yourshoes Nikeslatest releaseI likethe Mickeybag youbought yesterday/I heartheJack Jonesstore ison salethis week.。