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一题型解读申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱二写作结构写信目的f详述优势f期盼回复自点点相语技性成表简期我明明关能格绩示述盼介信能经优优优优感打批绍息胜验势势势势谢算准源任三写作词汇词汇初级词汇高级词汇来源公司;;;广告n.firm,company,corporation newspaperwebsite advertisement招募V.need;look forrecruitbe fitfor/to do胜任be suitablefor/to dobe qualifiedfor/to dobe equalto sth.be competentin/to domeet therequirementsdiligenthardworking sociable,communicative,hospitable好客fit in wellout-going,easy-going,kind getwith others性格优势along well with othershave ateambe cooperativespiritresponsiblehave astrong senseof responsibilityenergeticbefull ofenergy;相关经验have donesth.before;be experiencedin havemuch/similar/previous experienceinhave agood commandof English语言优势do wellin bothspoken andwritten haveno difficultycommunicating with foreigners gainEnglishspeak Englishfluently a high levelof competencein Englishhavegood gradescome outtop inhavegood academicperformancemy class成绩优势have extraordinaryperformance in my schoolwork技能优势be goodat computerskills bewell equippedwith computerskills I am expertin/atdoing sth.文化意识know traditional culture wellhave agood knowledgeof traditional culture befullyacquainted withtraditional culture提高我的组织能力/沟通技巧increase myorganizational ability/communication skills拓宽视里予broaden my horizons申请目的增加信心build upmy confidence丰富我的课余生活enrich myafter-class life传播传统文化spread traditionalculture/convey our traditionalculture to foreigners联系;call/contact meat8885888e-mail/contact meat四写作句式五段落初级句式高级句式句第一段自我介绍信lIm Li Hua,a senior3student inahighschool.式息来源写信目的11have learnedon thewebsite that your companyneeds an English secretary.Im升really interestedin thisposition soIam writing to apply for it.级:21mwritingto apply for the position/vacancy ofsales manageradvertised in the
1.newspaper onJune4th.将3Im writingto expressmy interestin theposition as anEnglishsecretary.文41am writingto applyfor admissionto theEnglish Departmentof yourcollege.中第二段个人优势性lAs anoutgoing student,I get along well with my classmates.加格、特点2A11myclassmatesfind mean energeticstudent,who isalways readyto help黑others.词lMy educationtraining equipsme withnecessary skillsfor theposition,such as经历,能力汇computer andcommunication skills.升2My competencein Englishallows myto communicate withforeign students with级ease.
2.11believe thisjob willnot onlyprovide mewith avery preciouschance totake part申请目的按in socialpractice activitiesbut alsoenrich myafter-class life.要21think itsa preciousopportunity forme toincrease myorganizational skillsas求well asbuilding upmy confidence.将lFm confidentthat Iam qualifiedfor the job dueto mygreat passionforit.表达胜任句2Fm fullyconvinced that I willbe competentin theposition.式第三段联系If youconsider meappropriate for the job,please call/contact meat...or e-mail me升at...级1Thank youfor consideringmy applicationand Imlooking forwardto your earlyreply.
1.从2Im surethat I can perfectlylive upto yourexpectations.Id appreciate it/begrateful if you couldtake myapplication iuloconsideration/give methe报opportunity.Looking forwardto yourearly reply.纸笫三段希望和感谢3I shallbe muchobliged ifyou willbe sokind asto helpme accomplishmy上long-cherished wish.得如果您能好心帮我实现我长期以来的愿望,我将非常感激知你4Your promptattention andreply willbe greatlyappreciated.Thank youin们advance.在如蒙迅速答复,本人将不胜感激,先表谢意招募志愿者,接待来访的国外学生,我写信申请这一职位(改成分词作状语)】I haveleamed fromthe newspapethat youare lookingfor volunteers to welcomethe coming foreign students.Im writingtoapplyforthe job.句式升级Learning fromthe newspaperthat youare recruitingvolunteers toreceive the coming foreign students,Imwriting to recommend myself as a qualified candidate fortheposition..首先,我英语口语好,可以和外国学生交谈自如(用改写)2so/such…that…First,Tm goodat spoken English soI cancommunicate withforeignstudentseasily.句式升级To beginwith,I havesuch agood commandof oral English that I cancommunicate withforeign friends withgreat ease.我对我的英语口语非常有信心,因为我在美国当了三年交换生(改成分词作状语)
3.T havegreat confidencein myoral Englishbecause Iwas an exchange student in America for three years.句式升级Having beenanexchangestudentinAmericaforthreeyears,I havegreat confidenceinmyoralEnglish..此外,我很外向且友善,喜欢交朋友,能和他人相处融洽(用分词作状语改写
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①②Besides,Fm easy-going,kindand enjoys making friends.It enables me toqet alonewellwithothers.句式升级Additionally,being easy-going andhospitable,I enjoymaking friends,which enablesme to fit inwell withothers..我曾经在一所国际学校担任志愿者,获得了很多相似的经验(用分词作状语改写)5I oncevolunteered in an international school and gained much similar experience.句式升级T oncevolunteered inan internationalschool,gaining muchsimilar experience.我希望通过参加这次活动能拓宽我的视野并且传播我们的传统文化(用改写)
6.aswellasI hope to broaden myhorizons and spreadour traditionalculture bytaking partin theactivity.句式升级I expectto conveyour traditionalculturetothem as well asbroadening myhorizons byparticipating intheactivity..我可以练习英语口语,最重要的是,我会得到一些宝贵的工作经验()7What mattersmost isthat...as wellas...I canpractice my spokenEnglish.Most importantly,I will get some valuable job experience.句式升级What mattersmost isthatI willgetsomevaluablejobexperienceaswellas practicingmyspokenEnglish..如果我被选中作志愿者,我将全力以赴(状语从句的省略形式)8If Iam chosenas avolunteer,I willdo mybest.句式升级If chosenas avolunteer,I willdevote myenergy andtime tothe job.If selectedasavolunteer,Iwillendeavour todo mybest.六实战演练假定你是李华,你从报纸上得知你校学生会在招募志愿者,接待来访的国外学生请你写信应聘内容包括口语能力L.性格特点
2.相关经验3,应聘目的4同学们,如果你还在为如何组织语言发愁,请看这里吧Paral从报纸上得知你们在招募志愿者,接待Dear Sir or Madam,来访的国外学生,我写信申请这一职位首先,我英语口语好,可以和外国学生L
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22.Para3期望你早日回复Yours,Li HuaDearSir orMadam,I havelearned fromthe newspaperthat youare lookingfor volunteersto welcomethecomingforeignstudents.Im writingtoapplyfbr the job.First,Im goodat spokenEnglish soI cancommunicate withforeignstudentseasily.Besides,Im初easy-going,kind andenjoysmaking friends.It enablesme togetalongwellwithothers.I oncevolunteered级inan internationalschoolandgainedmuchsimilarexperience.1hopetobroadenmyhorizonsandspread范ourtraditionalculture bytaking partintheactivity.文In aword,Im surethatIcan dothejobwell.I wouldappreciate itif Icould getthejob.Lookingforward to yourearlyreply.Yours,Li HuaDearSirorMadam,Learning fromthe newspaperthatyouare recruitingvolunteerstoreceive thecomingforeignstudents,Im writingtorecommendmyselfasaqualifiedcandidatefortheposition.高级To beginwith,I havesuch agood commandof oralEnglish thatIcancommunicatewithforeign范friendswithgreat ease.Additionally,being easy-going andhospitable,I enjoymakingfriends,which文enablesmetofitinwellwithothers.I oncevolunteered inaninternationalschool,gaining muchsimilarexperience.As forme,apart frombroadening myhorizons,it isconveying ourtraditionalculturethatmatters.In aword,Fm fullyconvinced thatI wontdisappoint you.I wouldappreciateitifyoucould considermyapplication.Looking forwardtoyourreply atyour earliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua。