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高考英语写作教案一.评分要求内容高级句型及词汇连接词词数卷面10分5分3分2分5分二.万能句型1)先背3个句子Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvancedmoreandmorearecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.(讲重要性)Thepopularityofdigital...willhavegreatinfluenceonourworkstudyandeverydaylife.OntheonehandButontheotherhand.(讲影响)3Toconcludearcjustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemayhavelesstroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.Howeveronepointshouldbekeptinmindthatwcshouldtakesensibleuseofthemalwaysbeingthemasterofthem.(结尾段)Ps:灵活运用第I句和第2句,根据不同模板自由组合2)模板(2个模板)1开头段先讲重要性,然后转讲不好的地方中间段措施结尾段先来个小转折再进入总结开头段Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvancedmoreandmorearecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.Howeverwhatworriesmostofusisthat中间段Firstly....SecondlyLastlybutinnomeansleast结尾段Toconcludearcjustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwcmayhavelesstroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.Howeveronepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuseofthemalwaysbeingthemasterofthem.2开头段先讲重要性,然后转讲争论中间段转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)结尾段直接进入总结(即你的观点)开头段Itisacceptedthat....Playsasignificantpartfbrboth...»andwhatsmorealotofattentionisbeingdrawntothechangeof.....Howeverwhether...deservessuchanattentionpeoplesideasvary.中间段:OntheonehandsomepeopleholdtheviewthatOntheotherhandagreatmanypeopleinsistthat....结尾段Frommyperspectivehowever….(你的观点).Therefbreitstimethat(措施之类的)重点背1)5)6)7)句子,最好全部都被过一遍,琢磨怎么用)Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyablethatistosaysthcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.ooo能让我们的生活更美好,也就是说,可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩)Forthemajorityofpeoplereadingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethefocusoftheirlivesandthesourceoftheirhappinessandcontentment对于很多人来说,学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活ooao,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructivelymakesapersoncontentedwithnotimeforboredom.占据了某人大部分时间,使得某人没空想东想西充实了某人生活Whafsmorelivinginschoolcansavethemagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandschooleverydaysotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyoniheiracademicwork.住校为学生省去了不少时间,这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上Littlebylittleourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.一点一滴,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyleitisimportanttofindtimetolearncertainnewknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes:itisnevertoolatetolearn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说,抽空学习一门新技术很重要Themajorityofstudentsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovideihemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskillswhichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧,这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-jobstudentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudiesbutgainmuchexperienceexperiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarcbeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsandknowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.ISthcanproducepositiveeffectson...inmorethanoneway.什么东西可带来好影响2Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…什么东西可带来不好的影响三.高级词汇occur替换thinkofSuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.—Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.Itoccurredtoinethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.devote替换spendHespendsallhissparetimeinreading.—►Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.seek替换want/lookforTheysoughtwantedtohidehemselvesbehindthetrees.average替换ordinaryImanaverageordinarystudent.but替换veryThefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.—►ThefilmwesawIasinightwasnothingbutinteresting.Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.seat替换sitOnhiswaytoschoolhefoundanoldladyseatedsittingbytheroadlookingworried.suppose替换shouldHeissupposedtoshouldhavedrivenmoreslowly.appreciate替换thankThankyouverymuchfbryouhelp.一Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch./Yourhelpismuchappreciated.thecase替换trueIdontthinkitisthecasetrue.on替换assoonasAssoonashearrivedhebeganhisresearch.—►Onhisarrivalhebeganhisresearch..dueto替换becauseofHearrivedlateduetobecauseofthestorm.cover替换walk/readAftercoveringwalking10milesweallfelttired.contributeto替换behelpful/usefulPlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.—PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.roundthecomer替换comingsoon/nearbyThesummervacationisroundthecornercoming.DoyouhaveanyplansLiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecornernearby.cometolight替换discoverThefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.—Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfAftervisitingtheworkshopwcwentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaballhadagoodtime.comeupwith替换thinkofJackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwiththinksofnewideas.setaside替换saveSomestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.2004天津卷beof+n.替换adj.TheproductsareofhighqualityverygoodandaresoldeveiywhereinChina.referto替换talkabout/ofmentionTheprofessoryoureferredtotalkedaboutisveryfamous.cannotbut/cannothelpbut替换havetodocouldnotbuthadtogohome.moreoftenthannot替换usuallyMoreoftenthannotUsuallythemeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.lest替换sothat/inorderhatIwrotedownhistelephonenumbersohatIwouldnotforgetit.—IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestIshouldforgetit.belongforsth./belongtodosth.替换wanttodosth./wishforIwanttoseeyouverymuch.—Iamlongtoseeyou.becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabso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1、根据衔接词本身在文章中起到的作用主要分为以下四类即“起”、“承”、“转”、“合I表示“起”的词/词组用于开篇引出扩展句atfirst最初fbronething...foranotheratpresent现在;当今currently目前;recently最近firstly第——ingeneral——般说来inthebeginning起初onetheonehand...ontheotherhandtobeginwith首先;第一一方面…另一方面firstofall首先;第一generallyspeaking一般地说inthefirstplace首先;第一onthewhole总起来说lately最近tostartwith首先;第一presently现在;此刻now现在2有关“承”的常用词语用来承接上文after/aflerthat/afterwards此后bythistime此时afterafewdays几天以后certainly无疑地;当然地afterawhile过了一会儿therefore因此;结果also/too并且;又forexample例如atthesametime同时forinstance例如beside此外forthispurpose为了这个目的Besides/whatsmore而且;此外fromnowon从此inotherwords换句话说so所以inparticular特别(地)soon不久inthesameway同样地still仍然bytheway顺便提一句then然后indeed的确third第三;第三点meanwhile与此同时thirdly第三moreover而且,此外foranother其次nodoubt无疑地suchas正如obviously明显地later后来ofcourse当然truly事实上;真实地particularly特别地unlike…不像;和不同whatismore而且;此外
(3)有关“转的常用词语用来表示不同或相反的意见afterall毕竟fortunately幸运地allthesame依然;照样anyway无论如何inspiteof尽管;虽然atthesametime同时;然而bythistime此时though/although尽管nodoubt无疑地in/bycontrast对比之下onthecontrary相反地eventhough即使otherwise否则still仍然unfortunately不幸地infact事实上unlike不像;和不同asamatteroffact事实上yet仍;然而;但是especially特别地
(四)有关“合的常用词语用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容aboveall最重要的是accordingly于是asaresult结果insum总之,简而言之ashasbeennoted如前所述insummary简要地说asIhavesaid如我所述onthewhole总体来说;整个看来atlast最后therefore因此byandlarge一般说来thus因此briefly简单扼要地tospeakfrankly坦白地说bydoingso如此tosumup总而言之eventually最后surely无疑finally最后toconclude总而言之inbrief简言之nodoubt毫无疑问inconclusion总之,最后undoubtedly无疑inshort简而言之truly的确inaword总之so所以certainly当然地;无疑地obviously显然allinall总之
2、根据衔接词本身的意思和文章连接所需要的逻辑意义,可分为以下14类Heneverstudiedhardandasaresulthefailedinthelastexamination.Heislateforworkasaresultoftrafficaccident.HewantedtobuyaradioforstudyEnglishandaccordinglyhermotherWearedelayedbecauseofatrafficjam.Uissuccessisduetohisexcellentwork.owingto(因为,由于)Owingtohisabsenceourmeetingisnotheld.thanksto(由于,多亏J)Thankstoagoodteachershepassedtheexamination.Nowthatyouhavegrownupyoumustearnforyourself.Ybucouldrealizeyourdreamsolongasyoutryitagainandagain.Sinceyouareherenowyoudbettergiveahand.Thepolicyisharmfulinthatitmayencouragepeopletogiveup.TheofficespeaksatthetopofhisvoicesothateverysoldiercouldThereisacalculatingmistakethere;thereforetheansweriswrong.IwillgotherethismorningasamatteroffactIamonly10Iwillgothere.Myfriendwillgowithmeaswell.FranklyspeakingIamnotverysatisfactorywithyourwords.InthiscaseIwillgothereassoonaspossible.Hurryuporelseyoullbelate.YoumustcarrythispassportotherwiseyouwillbestoppedbytheIfsoitwillmakeagreatdifference.inaddition(除此之夕卜)Ineedyourhelp.InadditionIalsoneedhersupport.Firstwemustworkhard.Besideswemustworkwithacreativemind.andmoreover(而且)Thehatistherightsizeforyouandmoreoveritgoeswellwithyourskinthatistosay(这就是说)ThestockpriceisdecliningthatistosayIamlosingmoney.inotherwords(换句话说)IamnothungryinotherwordsIreallydislikethefoodinthiscanteen.equallyimportant(同样重要的)Youshouldreadmorenewsfromnewspapersandequallyimportantkeepaneyeon(henewsfromtheradio.whatsmore(并且更加重要的是)Itisharmfultomyhealthandwhatsmoreitisnogoodtomywork.lastbutnotleast(最后的但并不是最不重要的)Lastbutnotleastmythanksshouldgotoeverymemberofmyclass.
(5)表示比较关系equally(同样的)AsateacherIshouldteachwellhutequallyIshouldstudywellinthesamewayItissuchacoincidencethatwefigureitoutinthesameway.incontrastto(与…相反)Incontrasttoyourbeliefiquitedisagreewithyou.insteadIfyoudontgoTilgoinstead.onthecontrary(相反地)YouthoughtIlikeit.OnthecontraryIdislikeit.incontrast(相反)Itishotinthedaytimebutincontrastitsverycoldatnightwhile(然而)WearehappyinChinawhilemostAfricansliveunhappily.。