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第一部分应用文写作类型04建议类建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,并说明理由,使别人了解自己的想法、主张,能利用所提建议解决有关问题的一类信件建议信要简洁明确、理由充分、具有合理性和说服力其结构一般如下
①、明确问题,并表明帮助意愿
②、提出具体建议并给出相应的理由
③、希望对方的问题得到解决素材精粹【高分句型】首段开门见山表明写信目的Imverysorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinatthemoment.Herearesometipsforyou.获悉此刻你遇到……麻烦,我深感遗憾这是给你的一些建议Learningthat*mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto得知,我写信给你一些关于如何…的建议主体部分提出具体建议WhenitcomestosuchasituationIwouldliketosuggestthatForonethingForanotherWhatsmore当遇到这种情况时,我想建议…一方面,……另一方面,……而且,…AsfarasImconcerned/Frommypointofviewitisagoodideato/itwouldbewiseofyoutoBesidesIstronglyadviseyouto..Lastbutnotleastyoucan就我而言/在我看来,……是个好主意/你……是明智的此外,我强烈建议你……最后但同样重要的是,你可以……尾段希望采纳建议并表示祝福
1.Personallyitwouldbebeneficialifyoustickto在我看来,如果你坚持的话会有好处的
2.1willbeveryhappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.SincerelyLiHua【答案】DearSirorMadamImLiHuaanexchangestudentstudyinginourschool.KnowingthatyoureplanningtostartsomeschoolclubsaboutChinesecultureImwritingandtryingtomakeasuggestion.AlthoughthereexistallkindsofschoolclubsnoneofthemfocusesontraditionalChineseculture.MysuggestionisthataChinesepaintingclubshouldbeestablished.ForonereasonChinesepaintingisaformofartwithalonghistorywhichstandsforthecivilizationofancientChina.Foranothertheclubmayappealtomoremembers-notonlyChinesestudentsbutalsootherstudentsbecausethereisnolanguagebarriertoappreciateart.Iwouldbegratefulforyourtakingmyadviceintogoodconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.SincerelyLiHua【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求考生就成立关于中国文化的社团一事给学校提建议【详解】.词汇积累代表represent—standfor吸弓I attract一appealto欣赏enjoy一admire/appreciate将纳入考虑之中consider—take...intoconsideration/account.句式拓展简单句变为复杂句原句Iwouldbegratefulfbryourtakingmyadviceintogoodconsideration.拓展句Iwouldbegratefulifyoutakemyadviceintogoodconsideration..【点评】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyoureplanningtostartsomeschoolclubsaboutChinesecultureImwritingandtryingtomakeasuggestion.使用了现在分词作原因状语及that引导的宾语从句[高分句型2]ForonereasonChinesepaintingisaformofartwithalonghistorywhichstandsforthecivilizationofancientChina.使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会很开心
2.Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助佳作共赏DearMichaelFmmorethandelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheTraditionalChineseCultureCompetition.Imwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.TobeginwithitisnecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningtraditionalChineseculturethusbroadeningyourhorizonsandwellequippingyouforthecomingcompetition.SecondlywhynotwatchsomevideoclipsYouareboundtogetsomeinspirationfromthem.Asforwhenandwheretomeetcanwemakeitat4OOthisFridayafternooninyourclassroomIfitsnotconvenientforyoupleaseletmeknowwhattimeissuitableforyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YoursLiHua实战突破Test1假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Tom对中国美食很感兴趣,打算在间隔年gapyear期间学做中国美食,他写信想你征询建议请你给他回信,内容包括.推荐美食;.说明理由;.表达祝愿注意.写作词数应为80左右;.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答注意.词数100左右;.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数DearTomYoursLiHua【答案1Onepossibleversion:DearTomImpleasedtoknowyouintendtolearntocookChinesecuisineduringyourgapyear.Ithinkfriedriceisyourbestchoice.Friedriceiseatenasamaindish.Itisflavorfulandiseasytolearn.Friedriceismadefromricewithmanyotheringredientsthatyoucanchoosetosuityourpreferencessuchasporkbeefchickeneggorvegetables.Itisafastmealbecauseitnotonlycooksquicklybutalsorequiresaminimalamountofpreparation.Ihopemyrecommendationwillbehelpful.Mayyouhaveagoodtimelearningit.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给对中国美食很感兴趣,打算在间隔年gapyear期间学做中国美食的澳大利亚笔友Tom写一封回信,内容包括推荐美食;说明理由;表达祝愿【详解】.词汇积累
①高兴的pleased-happy
②可口的flavored-delicious
③要求require一request
④有用的helpfbl-useful.句式拓展合并简单句原句Friedriceiseatenasamaindish.Itisflavorfulandiseasytolearn.拓展句Friedriceiseatenasamaindishwhichisflavorfulandeasytolearn.【点睛】[高分句型1]Friedriceismadefromricewithmanyotheringredientsthatyoucanchoosetosuityourpreferencessuchasporkbeefchickeneggorvegetables.(运用了that弓I导的定语从句)[高分句型2]Itisafastmealbecauseitnotonlycooksquicklybutalsorequiresaminimalamountofpreparation.(运用了because引导的状语从句和固定用法notonly...butalso)Test2假如你是李华,刚参加完高考且取得优异成绩你的朋友王东今年读高三感到读书压力大晚上睡不着,写信向你求助,希望你能给一些建议让他能够顺利度过高三学习生活内容要点如下.相信自己的老师,提高课堂听课效率;.课后合理安排时间,提高解题效果;.尽可能抽空锻炼,树立信心注意.词数80左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯DearWangdongIamsorrytohearthatyouaresleeplessunderthestressofstudyinSeniorThree.YoursLihua【答案】DearWangdongIamsorrytohearthatyouaresleeplessunderthestressofstudyinSeniorThree.Iwouldliketosharesomeadvicewithyou.Tobeginwithyouaresupposedtobelieveinyourteachersandimproveyourefficiencyinclass.Whatsmoreitisagoodideatoarrangeyourtimeproperlyafterschoolwhichcanenhancetheeffectivenessofyourproblemsolving.Atlasttakingtimetoexerciseasmuchaspossibleisbeneficialtobuildupself-confidence.Hopefullymyadvicecanhelpyou.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给朋友王东写信,给一些建议让他能够顺利度过高三学习生活【详解】.词汇积累建议advice^suggestion首先tobeginwith=firstofall合适地properly一suitably止匕夕卜:whafsmore=inaddition.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句Hopefullymyadvicecanhelpyou.拓展句Ihopethatmyadvicecanhelpyou.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whatsmoreitisagoodideatoarrangeyourtimeproperlyafterschoolwhichcanenhancetheeffectivenessofyourproblemsolving.(which弓[导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Atlasttakingtimetoexerciseasmuchaspossibleisbeneficialtobuildupself-confidence.(动名词短语作主语)Test3假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom给你写信说他最近对打篮球很感兴趣,经常和朋友一起去打篮球,结果影响学习,作业不能及时完成,上课不能集中注意力,于是给你写信求助请你用英语给他写一封建议信,内容包括.要以学习为中心,后做喜欢做的事;.学会控制自己并合理利用时间;.要学会平衡学习和娱乐注意
1.词数90左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯DearTomYoursLiHua【答案】DearTomIamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinplayingbasketballwhichisofgreathelptoyourhealth.AbouttheproblemsmentionedinyourletterIthinkyoumustputwhatyoumustdofirstandthendowhatyoulike.Asastudentyouhavetoattachgreatimportancetoyourstudy.Firstfinishyourhomeworkontime.Thenarrangeyourtimeproperly.Inadditionyoushouldlearntocontrolyourselfandmakethebestuseofyoursparetime.WhatIwanttoemphasizeisthatnoonecansucceedwithouthardworkandconcentrationsoyoushouldlearntobalanceyourstudyandbasketball.Youcansparesomefreetimetoplaybasketball.Hopingthingsgoallrightwithyou!YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于书信写作要求考生给Tom写一封建议信,帮助他解决学习上遇到的问题【详解】.词汇积累开心的delighted/pleased^glad对感兴趣showinterestin—beinterestedin认为很重要stresstheimportanceoJattachgreatimportanceto准时punctually—ontime止匕夕卜additionally—inaddition充分利用takefulladvantageof^makethebestuseof强调layemphasison一emphasize.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句Asastudentyouhavetoattachgreatimportancetoyourstudy.拓展句Asastudentyouhavetoattachgreatimportancetoyourstudywhichisveryimportantforyou.【点睛】【高分句型1]Iamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinplayingbasketballwhichisofgreathelptoyourhealth.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]WhatIwanttoemphasizeisthatnoonecansucceedwithouthardworkandconcentrationsoyoushouldlearntobalanceyourstudyandbasketball.(运用了What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)Test4假如你是李华,你班来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton首次来中国读书,因语言交流有困难他萌生了回家的念头请你给他写一封信,帮助他走出困境内容要点如下.分析问题;.你的建议注意.词数120左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯DearKentonYoursLiHua【答案】DearKentonImsorrytohearyouhavedifficultywithcommunicationbutImwillingtohelpyououtofthetrouble.Totellyouthetruthitisnaturalthatyoushouldmissyourparentsandwanttogohome.ButpersonallyIdontthinkwecanlivewithourparentsallthetime.Thusitisagoodchancefbryoutobemoreindependent.Youcancallyourparentsmoreofteninsteadofgivingupyourstudy.IfyoudontmindIwouldliketobeyourfriend.WecanchatfrequentlywhichwillimproveyourChinesealot.Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文要求考生给来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton写一封信,帮助他分析他所面临的困境并给出建议【详解】.词汇积累说实话坦白地说:totellyouthetruth-tobefrank正常的natural—normal就个人意见personally一inmyopinion机会chance一opportunity.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句Youcancallyourparentsmoreofteninsteadofgivingupyourstudy.拓展句Ithinkthatyoucancallyourparentsmoreofteninsteadofgivingupyourstudy.【点睛】【高分句型1]IfyoudontmindIwouldliketobeyourfriend.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句)【高分句型2】WecanchatfrequentlywhichwillimproveyourChinesealot.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)Test5假定你是李华,正在伦敦某学校做交换生你校要成立一些有关中国文化的社团,于是向同学们征求建议请你给负责人写一封建议信,内容如下
1.说明目的;2提出建议;
3.解释原因注意
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯DearSirorMadam。