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专题11人文历史I.应用文写作咨询信■j引出所要咨询的内容谋篇布局卜吸行咨询或请求指尊U表达个人希望或谢意「典题示例」2019•天津卷假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件1你喜欢的讲座话题从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一；2选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；3希望从中有何收获注意1词数不少于100；2可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数DearChrisrmLiJinastudentatChenguangHighSchool.Thankyouforyourtime.YoursLiJin「高分范文」DearChrisImLiJinastudentatChenguangHighSchool.
①]gotthenewsthatyourschoolwillsendteacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange.Duringtheactivityyouwi11givealectureonWesternart.
②Youwanttoseekforadviceonwhattopicthelecturewillbeabout.Frommypersonalnotemusicismypriority.311aminterestedinallkindsofmusicamongwhichjazzismyfavourite.Iwanttoknowaboutthehistoryofjazzandsomefamousjazzsingers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldaddsomesessionsofenjoyingjazz.Thankyoufouyourtime.YoursLiJin「名师点评」.词汇美文章运用了很多高级词汇，如week-longgivealectureonseekforadviceonfromone，spersonalnoteprioritybeinterestedinsession等.句式美
①句thatyourschoolwillsendteacherstomyschoolforaweek-longsummerexchange是that引导的同位语从句，用来说明news的具体内容
②句whattopicthelecturewillbeabout是由what引导的宾语从句作介词on的宾语
③句amongwhichjazzismyfavour句e是非限制性定语从句这是一个增分点「即时演练」假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术节期间表演英语情景剧sitcom并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教MrSmith给予指导现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括.提出请求；.指导内容；.期待回复注意
1.词数80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯【参考范文】DearMrSmithWearetoputonanEnglishsitcomduringtheArtFestival.SoImwritingtoaskifyouwouldbekindenoughtogiveussomeguidance.Thesitcomissetinanuclearfamilywhereaseriesofamusingincidentshappen.Itsplotsandlineshavealreadybeeninplacebutconsideringthepossibleproblemswestilllongforyourexpertisetopolishthem.Additionallytheperformersbeinginexperiencedweexpectyourguidancewithperformingskills.Yourhelpwiththesitcomwillbemuchappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourfavourablereply.YourssincerelyLiHuaII.读后续写写作任务」阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文MynameisMananandIaminthesixthgrade.OfallthefestivalsDiwaliaHindufestivalthatiscelebratedinautumnismyfavouritebecauseIcansetofffireworksandeatdeliciousfoodsduringthefestival.OnedayIwentshoppingforfireworkswithmygrandfather.IwaslookingatthebrightlycolouredfireworkswhensuddenlyIbumpedintoalittleboy.Alljny[悬念1]Iquicklybentdowntopickthemup.ThenInoticedtheboy，sfacewasfullofwonderandamazementashestaredatmyfireworks.Itappearedasthoughhehadneverseenanythisclosely.WhenhebentdowntopickthemupIsnatchedthemfromhimandquicklyputthembackinmybag.AsIstoodtherelookingathimIrealisedtherewassomethingdifferentaboutthisboy.Hisclotheswereoldandtorn;helookedOnreachinghomeIfinishedmydinnerquicklyandranouttosetoffthefireworks.Iwasfascinatedbythevarietyofcoloursthatburstopenfromthefireworksandlituptheskybutmywonderwasshort-lived.Inoticedthatmygrandfatherhadgoneinsidethehousecoughing.WonderingwhyIlookedaroundandnoticedallthesmokethatmayhavebeenirritatinghisthroat.FeelingbadforonlyasecondIcontinuedlightingthefireworksoneafteranother.Butinsidemeitfeltdifferent一Ifeltguiltyabouttakingpleasurefromburstingthefireworks.IcouldfeelmyconscienceprickingmeuManan!HowcanyoudothisItjusttakesafewminutesforallthemoneytodisappearinsmokebuttheboyyoumettodaylookedlikehedidnotevenhavethebasicnecessitiesoflife.Thechildreninorphanagesalsoneedloveandhelp.DidntyouseehowyourfireworkshaveaffectedGrandpatooCanyoustillignorethesethingsandindulgeinthiskindoffun”RealisingtheworthlessnessofthistemporarypleasureIreallywantedtousethemoneyinamorerewardingway.IstartedthinkingaboutmyownwaytocelebrateDiwali.[悬念3]CCA八八八八CA八CA八八.注意续写词数应为150左右Iwentuptomygrandfatherandtoldhimaboutmyplan.Soonenoughtheorphanagewasfilledwithlaughterjoyandcelebration.「写作指导」
一、理清文章大意关键:Who:MananWhere:athomeWhen:duringDiwaliWhat:celebratingDiwaliHow:TheauthorcelebratedDiwaliinameaningfulway.大意作者通过买烟花和放烟花的经历意识到应该把钱用在更有意义的地方
二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考烟花散落，别人看到会怎么想？那个孩子会捡烟花吗？悬念2思考那个男孩子这么可怜，对比中会让作者有何感悟？悬念3思考那么作者会想出什么有意义的方式来过排灯节呢？
三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考
①爷爷会赞成作者的想法吗？
②作者会和父母讨论他的想法吗？
③作者他们去孤儿院应该买什么，带什么去？段首句2思考
①作者他们在孤儿院怎么庆祝节日？
②孤儿院的孩子会说些什么？
③作者有什么感悟？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下Paragraph1爷爷赞成作者的想法一和父母讨论想法一决定去孤儿院一采购所需物品Paragraph2在孤儿院联欢一放烟花一孤儿院的一个儿童发表了感言一作者感悟「高分范文」Iwentuptomygrandfatherandtoldhimaboutmyplan.Hesaiditwasagoodideaformetogotoanorphanageandcelebratethefestivalwithkidsthere.Laterthatdaywediscussedtheideawithmyparentsandtheyapplaudedit.Aftersomeresearchmywholefamilydecidedtovisit“HappyHome.FinallyonDiwaliwearrivedtherewithcakeclothessweetsgamesandgiftsforeveryone.Soonenoughtheorphanagewasfilledwithlaughterjoyandcelebration.Wesangsongsdancedtoldjokesandplayedgames.Andweevensetofffireworkstogether!Justthenaboywalkeduptomeandsaid“Thankyousomuch!Weveneverhadsomuchfunbefore.FeelingsatisfiedfromwithinIlookedatmygrandfatherwhowastellingstoriestothem.Evenbeforewerealiseditwasalreadytimeforustoleave.Wesaidgoodbyetothempromisingtocomebackagainsoon.IfeltveryhappybecausethisDiwaliwascelebratedinsucharewardingway.「名师点评」.使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动
①用even引出放烟花，呼应了原文的细节，又加强了语气，突出了烟花这一线索
②never一词凸显孩子们的快乐、欣喜之情
③用indeed加强语气，用best概括这种过节方式的意义.词汇与语法结构丰富、准确
①sangsongsdancedtoldjokesandplayedgames连动式描写，恰到好处
②Feelingsatisfiedfromwithin和promisingtocomebackagainsoon两处为动词-ing形式作状语
③文中用了定语从句whowastellingstoriestothem「即时演练」（2021•湖南石门一中模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopperandhavingagoodnoseforbargains.SowhenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale，Imarchedintothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwanderedhummingtomyselfandenjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofasale.Allofasuddenthereatthebackofthestoresatacanoe（轻舟）exactlylikemyhusbandsdreamSupremoNumero-Unowhosepicturehadbeenstuckonthebathroommirrorforyears.Myheartbeatwildly.Ipushedmywaythroughthecrowdsandnearlyfellintothecanoelookingforthepricetag.Thereitwaswiththemanufacturerssuggestedpriceat$6750plustaxcrossedoutandahandwrittenTOCLEAR$750ASIS.Mustbeamistake.$6000offSalesman.Ihadtotalktoasalesman.IspottedayoungfellowwithaHi・ImMathew”.uMathewtellmeaboutthisElSupremocanoe.WhatswrongwithitWhyisitonly$750”“0h・Theresnothingwrongwithit.Itsbrandnew.Wereclosingthestore.It，sonclearancelikeeverythingelse.I11gocheck.AfewminuteslaterhecamebackandsaidImsorryma，am.Someonemadeamistakeonthesaletag.Itshouldbe$4750forthewholepackage.”Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes.OhwellvIsaidsadly.Ofcourseitwastoogoodtobetrue.Thisisexactlylikemyhusbandsdreamboat.IguessIstartedtodreammyselfwhenIsawthatpricetag.He，sgoingtobe62yearsoldFriday.Hadtoretireearlyforhishealth.Itsbeenhardonjustthepensionbutthestubbornoldfoolhasbeensaving$10everyweekforyearstobuyonejustlikethis.IpromiseIwon，tbuyanythingbutitsjustanoldman，ssillydreamyouknow.AlwayssaidhewantedtofishinacanoeafterheretiredmyvoiceloweredandIturnedandwalkedaway.注意续写词数应为150左右IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme.Doyouhave$750plus$25fordeliverymaairfl”Maamtheressomethingyoushouldknow.Thisstorewasmygrandpasandthecanoehadbeenorderedbyhim.【参考范文】IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme.Doyouhave$750plus$25fordeliverymaaint”“Yes.Yes.ThatsaboutallIhave.”“WellthenyoujusthaveyourhusbandsittingatthefrontgateonFridaymorningaround10oclocksohecanbetherewhenmyDadandIcometounloadhisnewcanoe.We，11evenputabowonitforhisbirthday.”Istartedtocry.MyoldhandshookasIwroteoutmycheque.amtheressomethingyoushouldknow.Thisstorewasmygrandpasandthecanoehadbeenorderedbyhim.Healwayspromisedtoretireonedayandsaidhewantedtospendtimerelaxingandoutfishinginacanoe.Heswallowedhard.Mygrandpadiedsudden-likejustlastweek.Hewasonly68yearsold.Ithinkhe，dbemightyhappythatyourhusbandwillgetthiscanoe.YoujusthavetomakesureheusesitalotokayPromise”“Ipromise“IsaidasIdashedofftolookformydearsweethusband.。
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