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Section_VWriting一—写给笔友的信写作技法指导
一、根本结构第一局部,照应来信、介绍现状其次局部,答复卜.列问题或表达经过第三局部,提出愿望
二、增分佳句
(一)书信的开头常用句式Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingabout...Imverygladtotellyouwhatyouhavealwayshoped/whatyouaskedme.
(二)书信的主体常用句式IwouldliketobeavolunteerforIwillbefreeduringthesummerholidays.这个暑假我有空,想成为一名志愿者IamgoodatspokenEnglish;asaresultIwonthefirstprizeinanEnglishSpeechContestinourschoollastyear.我擅长英语口语,结果,我去年在我们学校进行的英语演讲竞赛中获得一等奖Ihopetolearnmoreaboutsocietyandimprovemymunicationskillsbybeingavolunteer;meanwhileIcanhelpvisitorsknowmoreaboutChineseculture.我盼望更多地了解社会,通过志愿者效劳提高我的沟通技巧,同时我可以关心游客知道更多的中国文化Inyoursparetimeyoucanenjoyyourselfinmanyplaces.闲暇之余,你可以有许多地方休闲消遣
(三)书信的结尾常用句式Bestwishes/regardstoyou!Goodluck(oyou!Pleasegivemybestwishesto...Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou![题目要求]假设你是李华,请依据下面提示给你的笔友John写一封信件,介绍你的海外留学过程留意
1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数DearJohnThankyouforyourletterdatedSeptember
12.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.第一步审题构思很关键
一、审题.确定体裁本文为书信;.确定人称本文的主要人称应为第一人称;.确定时态主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时
二、构思第一局部,介绍现状——秘鲁一家高校攻读学士学位其次局部,表达经过——签证、适应、学习等第三局部,提出愿望其次步核心词汇想周全spendsometimeindoingslh.花费时间做某事makefullpreparations做了充分的预备adjus〔」o适应settlein安排beoccupiedwith…忙于rutforward提出keepilud保持下去;保持优秀成果第三步由词扩句雏形现.现在我在秘鲁的一所高校里为我的学士学位而学习NowPmsludyinginauniversityinPeruformybachelorsdegree..离开我的祖国前,我花了大量时间排队得到我的签证BeforeIleftmymotherlandIhadsDentmuch」imeoueuingtogetmyvisa..虽然我为新生活做了充分的预备,但刚开头我还是不适应AlthoughLhadmadcfulLprcDarati〉nsformynewlife1didntadjust」itatfirst..后来,我渐渐地适应了那里的口常生活LaterIgraduallyfitinwiththeroutineoflifethere..为了提高学习,我的伴侣建议我住在当地人家里ToimprovemystudymyfriendremendedthatIshouldliveinalocalfamily..当我在我的新家安排好以后,我就忙于自己的学业功课AfterIsealedinmynewhomeIwasoccupiedwilhmysubject..我的导师是一个很严格的教授,他提出许多要求Mytutorisastrictprofessorandhepulforwardmanyrequirements.第四步句式升级造亮点.用不定式作目的状语改写句1NowImstudyinginauniversityinPerutoreceivemybachelorsdegree..用介词before改写句2Beforeleavingmymotherland.IhadspenlmuchtimeQueuingiogelmyvisa..用非谓语作让步状语改写句3HavingmadcfuHDrcDarationsformy」icw」ifc」didntadiust」oilatfirst.Toimorovemysludy.myfriendremendedme」o|iveina」ocalfan】ily..用非谓语作时间状语改写句6HavingsetUedinmYncwhomcIwasoccuDicdwithm¥subiect..用非谓语作状语改写句7Beingastriclprofessormytutorputforwardmanyrequirements.第五步过渡连接联成篇DearJohnThankyouforyourletterdatedSeptember
12.Now」mstudyinginauniversityinPcnjtoreceivemybachelorsdegree.Bcforc」caving」nymothciiand」ha」sDcntmuchtimcqucuing」ogctmYmadcfullpreparalionsformynewlife.Ididn〔adiuslloilalfirsl.LaterIgraduallyfilinwithihcroutincoflifeimprovem\study.myfricndrcmcndccLmc」o」ivcina」ocalthis-wayIcanimprovemysettledinmynewhomeIwasoccupiedwithmyastrictprofessor_n】y」ulor_pul_forward_many』do_well_in_my_subiecl_and」_will_keeD_it_uD.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua。