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考研英语写作三段论第一段一描述图画或图表第二段一解释寓意第三段一给出评论第一段第一句
1、Asisshownabove描述图画(倒装).Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper•报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注描述图画注意第一步寻找图画的中心事物,并确定中心事物的位置第二部描述中心事物,可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述第三部;寻找中心事物周围相关的事物,并进展简单的描述模式在图画中央有……(倒装),它……(主谓一致、现在分词、第二句一■总结
①Thepictureatthefistglimpseseemstobesimplebutonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.这幅画初看好似很简单,但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其浅薄的含义
②Theauthorsrealpurposeisnotthefactitselfbuttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的Thedisadvantagesovershadowthebenefits•Thebenefitsareinlargemeasurecanceledoutbytheproblems•⑵利大于弊Theproblemsseemtobepalecomparedwiththebenefits•Thedisadvantagescannotweighedagainstthebenefits•第三段好的现象Itisimperativethattheessencebeabsorbedandthedrawbacksbeneglectedduringthisprocessespeciallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosionwhenthenewsfactsopinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld•坏的现象Withaproperlowandanalertpublicitwillonlybeamatteroftimebeforetheproblembecomesthingsofthepast.伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众,这个问题迟早可以被解决Onlyinareasonableprosperousandhealthatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.只有在一个理性,繁荣和安康的环境中,我们才有希望看到这样一个理想的景象,人们能最大可能的去享受他们的生活不是图画本身,而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后终究隐藏着什么第二段第一句.一观点的提出Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主题.Innocountryotherthanchinaithasbeensaidisthisphenomenonmoreobvious•Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenonthatispeopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题.或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmfulbutalsodamaging•Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedoutbringingsomeproblemsatthesametimewiththeaboveonebeingtheforemost•在过去的十年间,由于改革开放政策的执行,我国的经济有了巨大的开展,但同时带来了一些问题,上面的问题是最严重的或Innocountryotherthanchinaithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous•万能观点
①图画主题的重要性Nothingcanbecomparedwith••••••isnotonlynecessarybutalsoindispensable•••••remainstobeanintegralpartin•••
②图画主题的有害性Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.••isnotonlyharmfulbutalsodamaging.••inlargemeasuredetrimental.第二句•一进一步讲解人们的态度(重视/不重视)Thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题.⑵Thepublicattachdueattentionto重要主题.givepriorityto•••优先考虑•••attachattentionto•••对••注意emphasizetheimportanceof•••强调•••的重要性stressthefundamentalroleof•••强调•••的基本作用第三句…对主题进展展开(3・4句)Bydoingso十一个角度平行展开・・・(也可用科学论据法或举例法)
(一)、十一个万能理由(角度)物质回报
①主题canprovide(offer)peoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.
②Theindustriousandinsightfulpeoplewillneverfailtoprofitsfrom(benefitfrom)doing主题.时间角度节约时间
①Itcanmakethemostofonestimechanceandtechnology.
②主题egLearningmorewesterncultureoccupyingsparetimesoconstructivelymakesapersoncontentedwithnotimeforboredom/wonderingandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon.浪费时间Asallknownthedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idledawayandtimeshouldbecherishedbut主题egstarworshipwasteshourslavishesdaysandevensquandersyearswhichleadsustosaykillsanevenmurdersyoungstersprimetime.效率角度主题egStarworship/AddictiontotheInternetmakespeoplewearyofotherimportantthingsdiscourageshimtolearnmoreandfinallylosetheirinteresttolearnandleadtolowgrades/lowefficiency/underachievement•Onesenergygraduallywearsoffandonesthoughtcreativethinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing主题.方便和快捷
①主题egWideWorldWebprovidespeoplewithup-to-dateconcreteandaccurateandvividinformation•主题e.g.MSNandotherinstantmessengerscanshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople•安全角度主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.
②主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjuryrobberyassaultstotrafficaccidents•身心安康主题canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblemsstressisolationandsolitude•Bydoing主题peoplestayhealthyandthereforepreventheartdiseaseshypertensiondiabetesorfattiness.3主题canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingonesknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld•生活娱乐Itsamajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesonespressureboredomstressandburden•表“受益〃的词组BroadenonesmindEnrichonesexperienceEnhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtooneswork
②Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformationbutasourceofimaginationaswell.3Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergyenthusiasmandcharm•Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytediousroutineandmonotonouslife•有助成长和成功自己和他人Peoplecanobtainfinancialaidsmaterialsupportmentalcomfortorspiritualbackfromyoursupport•Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou•Throughyourspeechesinstructionsorassistancetheycanbroadentheirmindsincreasetheirincome•3Throughyourencouragementtheycultivatethespiritofcompetitionparticipationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness•Thoughyourassistancenotonlycantheyaccumulatewealthbutwillalsoestablishtheircareerfitintosocietyandevenattainsocialstatus•Peoplewhotreatotherswithlovesinceritysympathyenthusiasmhospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers•@Itdose/doesntnecessarilycultivatetalentconfidenceself-worthself-relianceanddignity•文化价值观Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolenceconfidenceandtolerance•Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations•Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger•Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding•Itcanbreachthefriendlytiesandwidenthegapbetweenpeople•环境保护Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollutionnoisepollutionreducesoilerosionordesertificationpreventthethinnessofozonelayersreduceindustrialsewageandrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles•Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservationsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment•社会宏观角度Itcanminimizeinflationeconomicstagnationeconomicrecessionunemploymentrate•Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate•Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountrymeansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife•3Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartenshospitalsmedicalcentermuseumsschoollibrariestrainstohighwaysandexpressways•4Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducationemploymentsself-realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth•
二、科学论据法AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScienceCAS•••AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScienceCASS•••ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions-asurgeonawhilecollarworkeracarpenterandafarmer•Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.
三、举例子Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof•••withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多,下面这个是最有说服力的Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto•••thatIhavehoardnoticedandexperiencedthemostimpressiveoneis•••在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中,最有说服力的是第四句结尾句一一虚拟语气和利弊句虚拟语气1积极的主题如果没有•••,我们可能基本做不了•一Weretherenosthneverwouldwedosth•2消极的主题如果情况继续下去,我们将付出更加昂贵的代价Werethesituationtocontinueasitiswewouldpaythehighprice•egWerethetendencytocontinueasitisourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus•利弊句⑴弊大于利。