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主题谈论规则导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论规则,可使用含情态动词的被动语态.通过对校规、家规等规则的讨论,同学们会对规则产生敬畏感,从而做一个懂规则、守规矩的公民.介绍规则以让人了解,属于说明文范畴;议论和评价规则,属于议论文范畴;以书信形式谈论规则,属于应用文范畴.可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如SchoolrulesFamilyrulesLibraryrulesCinemarulesLaboratoryrules等等.题目回放假如你是李明,你的美国朋友Mike向你询问你校的校规.请你根据以下要点和要求,用英语给他回复一封邮件.写作要求
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名;2自拟标题,词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁本文要求通过回复邮件的形式介绍校规属于应用文.2审内容着重写有关着装、考勤、行为安全等的规则.3审时态主体时态为一般现在时.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计回复邮件的问候语及点题.中间至少从三个方面介绍校规.结尾谈谈自己对校规的感受.段落素描.Firstparagraph:HowarethingsgoingthesedaysLetme.......Thebody:Firstofallwemust...Thishelpsus...Second.......Lastparagraph:Eventhough...Ibenefitalot......YoursLiMing范本淬炼AOurschoolrulesDearMikeHowarethingsgoingthesedaysIamgladthatyou
①areinterestedinourschoolrules.Letmeintroducesomeofthem.Firstweshouldgettoschoolontimeandtakea
②30-minutereadingoftextbooksbeforeclassinthemorning.Whatismoreweneedtocleantheclassroomeverydayandkeepitclean.Inadditionwe
④aresupposedtolistencarefullyinclassandfinishourhomeworkafterschool.Ithinkthattheseschoolruleshelpus
⑤developourgoodhabits.DoyouthinksoYoursLiMing
①beinterestedin对感兴趣.
②30-minute三十分钟的这是个复合形容词.
③whatismore此为衔接语能使文章过渡自然.besupposedtodosth.应当做某事.
⑤developourgoodhabits养成我们的好习惯.亮点点评.整体框架设计和段落布局合理,思路清晰层次感较强.2衔接自然顺畅,使用了firstwhatismoreinaddition等衔接语.
3.运用了较多近义词,如shouldneedbesupposedto以避免词汇重复.OurschoolrulesDearMikeHowareyougettingalongthesedaysIamgladtoknowthatyou
①showagreatinterestinourschoolrules.Letmeintroducesomeofthemtoyou.Firstofallwemustwearschooluniformseveryday.Thishelpsus
②focusourattentiononourstudies.Anotherpointworthmentioningisthatwemustgettoschoolontime.
③ThankstothisruleIhavedevelopedagoodhabitofgettingupearly.Besideswearesupposedtogreetourteacherswhenwemeetthem.Inadditionwe
④arerequiredtodoourhomeworkcarefullyandhanditinontime.Indeedsomeoftheseschoolrulesarestrictbut
⑤Ibelievethatifweobeytheseruleswewillmakeprogresseverydayinourschoolwork.Iamlookingforward
⑥toknowingsomeofyourschoolrules.YoursLiMing
①showagreatinterestin对显示出很大兴趣.
②focusourattentionon集中我们的注意力于.
③thanksto…,多亏
④berequiredto被要求,此为被动结构.
⑤Ibelieve后接宾语从句,表明自己的观点.
⑥to为介词,其后knowing为动名词.亮点点评L本文与上篇文章相比,除能紧扣主题外,内容更加饱满不仅描述校规,还能表达自己的感受及遵守校规给自己带来的变化.2衔接自然衔接语firstofallanotherpointworthmentioningthankstobesidesinaddition等运用自如,行文流畅..句式多变,多处使用从句如宾语从句、表语从句、状语从句..词汇丰富,如使用introduce...tofocussb.sattentiononthankstodevelopagoodhabitofberequiredtolookforwardto等亮点词汇.佳作赏析AMyfamilyrulesThereare
①anumberofrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyouaboutthem.Firstmyparentsdonotallowmetogooutatnight;
②otherwisetheywillgetangrywithme.SecondonmyschooldaysIcannotwatchTVafterschoolbecausemymotherthinksitmayaffectmystudies.Thirdmyparentsdonot
③allowmetogetmyearspierced.WhatismoreIneedtodosomehouseworkinmyfreetime.HoweverIamallowedtochoosemyownclothesandIcantakepartinsomeactivities
④organizedbymyschool.Inmymindthefamilyrules
⑤reflectmyparentsloveforme.Iwilltrymybesttofollowtheserules.
①anumberof许多.
②otherwise否则.
③allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事.
④organized…是过去分词短语充当后置定语,修饰activities.
⑤reflect反映.亮点点评.本文整体结构清晰,段落分明,叙事有条理,内容充实..一些简洁衔接语的使用,如firstotherwisewhatismorehowever等,使文章过渡自然,行文流畅..词1匚丰富,使用了anumberofotherwisegetangrywithsb.affectallowsb.todopiercechoosetakepartinorganizereflectfollow等用语,增强了文章的生动性和表现力.Rulesforthezoo
①Ifyouarereadytovisitazooyouneedtoknowsomeoftherulesforthezoo.Firstlyyou
②arenotallowedtotalkloudlyinthezoobecauseitmayfrightentheanimals.Secondlytakingphotosislikelytodoharmtotheanimals
③especiallyusingtheflashsopleasedonotdothat.Thirdlyyoumustnotfeedtheanimalswithyourownfood.Mostimportantlyyoumustnottouchtheanimalsfortheymayhurtyou.Ibelievethatitisourdutytoobeytheserules
④whichareveryimportantinkeepingussafe.
①开篇用if引导状语从句,简洁提出文章主题.
②beallowedtodosth.被允许做某事.
③especially尤其是.©which引导非限制性定语从句.亮点点评.本文段落设计合理.开头和结尾紧扣主题,主体段落集中说明主题逻辑性较强..运用了一些衔接语,如firstlysecondlythirdlymostimportantly等使文章衔接自然..句式丰富,条件状语从句、原因状语从句、宾语从句等运用得当.COurschoolrulesEveryschoolhasitsownrulesforstudentstofollowand
①sodoesourschool.Firstofallwemustgettoschoolbefore7:30inthemorningfromMondaytoFriday.Inadditionwemustwearschooluniformseveryday
②whichhelpsusfocusourattentiononourstudies.Besideswecannotrunafterandfightwitheachotherintheschool.Ibelievethatifallofusfollowtheschoolruleswewilldevelopgoodhabitsand
③createahighly-effectivelearningenvironment
①s引导倒装句.
②which引导非限制性定语从句.
③createahighly-effectivelearningenvironment.创建高效的学习环境.亮点点评.本文框架结构合理,点题后介绍规则,发表看法..行文流畅,过渡自然,使用了firstofallinadditionbesides等衔接语..句式丰富,灵活运用倒装句、定语从句、宾语从句、条件状语从句等句式,显示了作者较强的语言驾驭能力..用词考究运用了一些亮点词汇和短语,如runafterfightwithdevelopgoodhabitseffective等为本文增添了亮点.素材宝库.好词妙语hearfromsb.收到某人的来信introducesth.tosb.向某人介绍某事Whatimpressedmemostwas...让我印象最深的是•.・…firstofall首先inaddition另外Anotherpointworthmentioningisthat...另夕卜值得——提的是••・・・・beallowedtodosth.被允许做某事beexpectedtodosth.被期盼做某事concentrateon专注于makeprogress取得进步bestrictwithsb.对某人严格.提分佳句Howarethingsgoingthesedays最近情况怎么样?Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinourschoolrules.我很高兴地了解到你对我们的校规感兴趣.Letmeintroducesomeoftheschoolrulestoyou.让我给你介绍一些校规.Wehavebenefitedalotfromtheschoolrulesalthoughsomeofthemarestrict.我们从这些校规中受益颇多,尽管有些规定很严苛.Wearesupposedtowearschooluniformsinsteadofourownclothesonschooldays.我们上学时应穿校服而非我们自己的服装.ThankstotheseschoolrulesIhavemademuchprogressinmyschoolwork.多亏了这些校规,我在学业上取得了很大进步.Itcandriveustoconcentrateonourstudies.它可促使我们专注于我们的学习.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.我期盼不久就收到你的来信.写作预热
1.句子改错1Howareyouthisdays2Therearemanyrulesthatwemustfollowtheminourschool.Keepschoolrulesisimportantforusstudents.Itmakeusdevelopgoodhabits.Wemustwearschooluniformseveryday.答案lthis改为these2去掉them3Keep改为Keepingmake改为makeseveryday改为everyday
2.句式变换Wehavemanystrictschoolrules.Wehavetofollowthem.改成含定语从句的复合句Teenagersareallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.用beallowedto仿写句子Ialwaysanswertheteachers*questionsactively.Idontkeepsilentinclass.用insteadof连成一句话4)规则在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用.(用playanimportantrole翻译成英语)5Ithinkweshouldhelpourparentswiththehousework.用holdtheviewthat改写句子答案Wehavemanystrictschoolrulesthatwehavetofollow.Thegirlswereallowedtowearskirts.Ialwaysanswertheteachers*questionsactivelyinsteadofkeepingsilentinclass.Rulesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.Iholdtheviewthatweshouldhelpourparentswiththehousework.实战练笔父母是我们最亲近的人,但他们给我们制定了家规,其中有些规则还较为严格,以至于我们有时与他们沟通时会遇到困难.请根据以下提示,以Howtocommunicatewithourparents为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文写作要点.多与父母沟通;.学会聆听;•当与父母发生不同意见时,保持冷静.范文HowtocommunicatewithourparentsCommunicatingwithparentsisoneofthemostseriousproblemsforteenagersnowadays.WhatshouldwedowhencommunicatingwithourparentsIwouldliketosharemyideaswithyou.Thefirstimportantthingisthatwearesupposedtotalkwithourparentsasoftenaspossibleinoursparetime.Thishelpsustounderstandeachother.Besideslisteningtoourparentspatientlyishelpfultousforwecangainagreatdealofenlightenmentfromtheirlifeexperienceandlisteningtothemreflectsourrespectforthem.Mostimportantlywhenwedisagreewithourparentswemustkeepcalm.Anywayweshouldlearntocommunicatewithourparentsinafriendlyandeffectiveway.。