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主题打听介绍导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论如何有礼貌地提出请求或打听信息.围绕本单元的主题及教材所给的语言材料,同学们将学会灵活运用宾语从句等句式表达请求或给予别人帮助,还可以拓展主题学会介绍某地或某个特定的生活环境等.可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如AconsultationletterAninvitationtotheDragonBoatFestivalAskingforinformation等.题目回放假如你叫李华,是新华中学的九年级学生.今年暑假你想参加北京英语夏令营theBeijingEnglishSummerCamp.请你自拟标题用英语写封信向负责人林老师咨询一些信息.内容包括介绍自己的一些基本信息,如姓名、英语能力等;.礼貌地询问信息,如时间、准备、食宿、活动、英语学习等;表示感谢.写作要求
1.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等信息;2词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁询问信息属于说明文.2审内容自己的个人情况介绍;用礼貌用语咨询信息;表达谢意.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头以自我介绍的形式引出写作话题即咨询信息.中间以礼貌的询问方式咨询相关信息.结尾以表达感谢结束.段落素描Firstparagraph:Tam...Iaminterestedin...Iwouldliketo......Thebody:Couldyoutellme...Ialsowanttoknow......Lastparagraph:ThankyouforhelpingmeandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply....YoursLiHua范本淬炼AAconsultationletterDearMr.LinIamLiHuaa9th-graderfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.IloveEnglishandIwanttoimprovemyEnglish.IwouldliketogotoBeijingfortheEnglishSummerCamp.Iamwriting
①toknowmoreinformationaboutit.I
②wouldliketoknowwhenthesummercampwillbeginhowlongitwilllastwhattheparticipantswilldoandwheretheywillstay.Whatismorepleaseletmeknowthe
③accommodationcostsandthelivingconditionsofthehotel.Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua
①toknow…,动词不定式表明写信的目的.
②wouldliketoknow后加whenhowlongwhatwhere引导的宾语从句,展开话题.
③accommodationcosts住宿费.亮点点评.本文用三段布局段落.第一段引出话题,中间段展开咨询,第三段表达谢意.段落设计合理,层次分明..文章恰当地运用了礼貌用语和宾语从句等句式,读起来顺畅、自然..文章用语较为丰富,如使用了9th-graderimproveparticipantaccommodationcostslivingconditions提升了文章档次.BAconsultationletterDearMr.LinMynameisLiHuaandIama9th-gradestudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I©aminterestedinlanguagelearningandIhopetoimprovemyEnglish.ThereforeIwouldliketogotoBeijingfortheEnglishSummerCamp.Iwonder
②ifyoucangivemesomeinformationaboutit.Firstpleasetellmewhenthesummercampwillstarthowlongitwilllastwhatthe
③participantsneedtopreparebeforeleavinghomewhattheywilldoduringthesummercampandwheretheywillstay.BesidesIwouldliketoknowthe
④livingconditionsofthehotel.MoreoverIwanttoknowwhether
⑤itisconvenienttogoshoppingnearthehotel.Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp.Iamexpectingyourreply.YoursfaithfullyLiHua
①用beinterestedinlanguagelearning表达对语言学习的兴趣.
②if引导宾语从句.participant参与人.©livingconditions居住条件.
⑤it充当形式主语,指代后面的动词不定式.亮点点评.文章段落布局合理,要点齐全,内容完整.主体段落用形式多样并且规范的礼貌用语,恰当完成了各项信息的咨询..文中句式多样,宾语从句等句式运用准确到位..上下文衔接语运用得当使用了firstbesidesmoreover等词,使文章衔接自然..文章语言丰富使用了improvelivingconditionsconvenient等用语,增强了语言感染力.整体上看,比起上一篇文章,本文句式、用词更为丰富.佳作赏析AAskingforahelpDearDavidHowareyou
①gettingalongthesedaysIamwritingtotellyou
②thatmyauntLucyisgoingtoNewYorkCityforaChinesesilkexhibition.
③AsitisherfirsttimetovisityourcityandsheknowslittleaboutitIwouldlikeyoutomeetherattheairport.MyauntsflightnumberisCAI86andshewillarriveat11amonAugust
6.Sheistallwithshortblackhairandshewillwearabluesilkdress.
④Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursDaMing
①getalong生活;进展.
②that引导宾语从句.
③as引导原因状语从句.lookforwardto期盼.亮点点评.本文以写信的方式表达了请求帮助的信息.文章布局合理,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段问候,第二段和第三段展开话题,第四段表达对回复的期待..本文句子之间衔接恰当使用了asand等简单而准确的衔接语.BAninvitationtotheDragonBoatFestivalDearDavidIamwritingtoinviteyoutotheChineseCultureWeek@whichwillbeheldinourschoolnextThursday.
②FocusingonthethemeoftheDragonBoatFestivalwewilllettheparticipantsexperiencethecharmoftraditionalChineseculture.The
③majoractivitiesareasfollows.Firstwewillmakezongziadumpling
④shapedlikeatinypyramidandwrappedinbambooorreedleavesintheschoolhallfrom2pmto3pm.Thenwewilltakeabustogethertoadragonboatraceat3:10pm.Finallyyetimportantlywewouldliketoinviteyoutomakeaspeechontheclosingceremonyat5pm.
⑤Iwonderifyouwouldliketocome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua
①which引导非限制性定语从句.
②focusingon…是现在分词充当状语.
③major主要的.
④shaped…andwrapped…,此处过去分词充当后置定语.
⑤Iwonderif…,用这种礼貌用语进行邀请,恰当贴切.亮点点评.本文以写信的方式展开,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段交代写信目的第二段和第三段分别介绍邀请活动的目的和内容,第四段表达对回复的期待..本文句式多样,使用了定语从句、现在分词充当状语、同位语、过去分词充当后置定语等..本文在词汇运用方面也表现不错,如focusonparticipantmakeaspeechclosingceremony等运用得当.CAskingforinformationDearsirormadamMynameisLiHua.Iamtakingalanguage
①trainingatOxfordUniversity.IplantohaveatriptoLondonthisSunday.
②LuckilyInoticeanadvertisementonatouraroundLondononthewebsiteandIamwriting
③forfurtherinformation.First
④IwouldliketoknowthepriceforstudentsandIwonderifitincludestheentrancefeeandthelunch.SecondIwanttoknow
⑤whetherthosevisitingtheBuckinghamPalacehavetimeforshopping.Finallywillyoupleasetellme
⑥whenthetourofLondonwillbefinishedIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua
①training培训.
②用luckily生动、准确地表达作者心情.
③forfurtherinformation寻求进一步的信息、.
④用Iwouldliketoknow和后面的Iwonderif…,表达询问.
⑤whether是否,引导宾语从句.
⑥when引导宾语从句.亮点点评.本文内容是以写信为形式的咨询文章整体结构清晰,富有逻辑..主体段落有两段,分别表达了咨询的缘由和内容,表述清晰..写作中运用了宾语从句、现在分词充当后置定语等句式同时运用了多种时态,如一般现在时和现在进行时等..写作中的用词也有亮点,如takealanguagetrainingluckilyfurtherinclude等.素材宝库.好词妙语lookforwardtosb/scoming期盼着某人的到来turnrightatthesecondcrossing在第二个路口右转notonlybecauseof...butalsobecauseof...不仅因为而且因为walkstraightdownthestreet沿着这条街道直走seeahospitalonyourleft在你左边看到一家医院beinterestedinlanguagelearning对语言学习感兴趣.提分佳句Youwontmissit.你不会错过的.Iamlookingforwardtoyourcoming.我期盼着你的到来.IamwonderingifIcangettherebybus.我不知道是否能乘公交车到达那里.Couldyoutellmesomethingaboutit你能告诉我相关情况吗?Godownthestreetandthenturnrightatthesecondcrossing.沿着这条街道走接下来在第二个路口右转.Ilovemyhometownnotonlybecauseofherbeautybutalsobecauseofthelovelypeoplehere.我热爱我的家乡,不仅因为她的美丽,而且因为这里可爱的人们.Walkstraightdownthestreetandsoonyouwillseeahospitalonyourleft.沿着这条街道直走,很快你就会在你的左边看到一家医院.写作预热句式变换WhatpreparationsdoIneedtomake(用couldyoupleasetell…改为表询问的礼貌用语)CanyoutellmewhereIcanbuynewsp叩ers(改为用Iwonderif引导宾语从句)Howcanweusetherightlanguageindifferentsituations(在Itisimportanttolearn后面置入这句话的内容)Theairinthecountrysideisfresher.Ilikethecountryside.(用where改为含非限制性定语从句的复合句)Thecostoflivinginthecountrysideislower.Thetransportationthereisnotconvenient4用并歹U连词连接两句子)答案:CouldyoupleasetellmewhatpreparationsIneedtomakeIwonderifyoucantellmewhereIcanbuynewspapers.Itisimportanttolearnhowwecanusetherightlanguageindifferentsituations.Ilikethecountrysidewheretheairisfresher.Thecostoflivinginthecountrysideislowerbutthetransportationthereisnotconvenient.实战练笔每个人都生活在一个特定环境中.请以WhatHikeaboutwhereIlive为题,并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文描述你生活的环境.写作要点.你生活在什么样的环境中;.你喜欢这个环境的哪些方面;.你对这个环境有何期待.写作要求.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名;.词数90左右.范文WhatIlikeaboutwhereIliveIliveinasmallandquietcityinHenanProvinceChina.Inthecitystoresandtallbuildingscanbeseeneverywhere.Thereforelifeisveryconvenienthere.Whatismorepeopleherearehardworkingandfriendly.ThatiswhatIlikemostaboutthecity.Franklyspeakingthecityhasitsownproblems.Airpollutionisthebiggestproblem.Luckilysomethinghasbeendonetocontrolthepollution.Hopefullytheairinthecitywillbecomefresherandthecitywillbecomemorelivable.。