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主题人际交流导读本综合训练的主题是人际交流这是同学们生活中必不可少的实用性话题.同学们在日常生活和学习过程中学会适当开展沟通交流,会使自己的生活和学习更快乐美好.有关这个主题的英语作文,可以是针对同学、朋友与他人沟通交流过程中遇到的问题提出建议,或者介绍如何与他人和谐相处等等.题目回放一同学们若想实现有效沟通建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于表达,而且要学会倾听请你根据下列写作要点,写一篇题为Beingagoodlistener的英语演讲稿,词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁本文是一篇演讲稿属于应用文.2审内容主要介绍成为一个好的倾听者的作用.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头开篇以演讲的形式引出主题.中间从不同角度讲述成为一个好的倾听者的作用.结尾紧扣主题,总结全文.段落素描.Firstparagraph:Helloeveryone.Thetopicofmyspeechis...Itismygreathonortobeheretosharemyideaswithyou.....Thebody:Listeningtoothersreflects...Parentsneedto...Teachers...Westudents...FirstlyIwouldliketosaythatlisteningtootherscan...Whatismore...Besides.......Lastparagraph:Inawordbeingagoodlistenercanhelpusgetclosertoeachother....Thanksforlistening!范本淬炼BeingagoodlistenerGoodeveningeveryone.The
①topicofmyspeechtodayis“Beingagoodlistener.^^Listeningtoothers
②reflectsourrespecttoothersandhelpsusimproveourinteipersonalrelationshipinourdailylife.Parentsshouldlistentotheirchildren
③sothattheycanhaveagoodunderstandingofeachotherandmakeiteasytogetalongwitheachother.Teachersneedtolistentotheirstudents@whichhelpsthemknowtheirstudentsneedsand
⑤improvetheteacher-studentrelationship.Inthemeantimestudentsaresupposedtolistentotheirteacherswhichhelpsthem
⑥benefitalotintheirschoollife.Inaword©beingagoodlistenercanhelpusgetclosertoeachother.Thanksforlistening!
①topic主题.
②reflect体现反映.
③sthat引导目的状语从句.©which引导非限制性定语从句.
⑤improve改善.
⑥benefitalot受益匪浅.
⑦beingagoodlistener是动名词短语充当主语.亮点点评L文章开头说明主题然后从父母与孩子、教师与学生之间互相倾听两个层面论述主题,尾段总结.整篇文章首尾呼应,逻辑严谨,层次感强..文中采用目的状语从句、非限制性定语从句等亮点句式为文章添彩..文中用语丰富、精准如使用interpersonalrelationshiphaveagoodunderstandingofeachotherimprovetheteacher-studentrelationshipgetclosertoeachother等,增强了文章的可读性.题目回放二父母是我们生活中最亲近的人.中学时代的我们在与父母沟通交流中难免会出现一些状况.那么我们应该怎样和父母交流呢请以Howwecommunicatewithourparents为题,写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法.审题指引1审体裁本文是一篇表达观点的作文,属于议论文.2审内容以如何和父母交流为主题展开讨论.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头开篇可以从与父母交流的重要性谈起,引出主题.中间主体段落主要叙述与父母交流的方法可从不同角度来谈,如分享想法、学会倾听、要有礼貌等.结尾紧扣主题,总结与父母交流的意义.段落素描.Firstparagraph:Communicationwithourparentsisimportantforithelpsus.......Thebody:Firstlyweshouldrespectourparentsandlistentothempolitelyandattentivelywhentheyaretalking.Secondlywecan.......Lastparagraph:Anywayaslongaswefindproperwaystocommunicatewithourparentswewill......范本淬炼HowwecommunicatewithourparentsCommunicationwithourparentsisimportant©forithelpsushaveagoodunderstandingofeachotherand
②getalongwellwitheachother.Howeveraswegrowolderwesometimes
③finditdifficulttocommunicatewithourparentseffectively.Inmymindtherearesomeproperwaystosolvetheproblem.Firstlyweshould
④respectourparentsandlistentothempolitelyand
⑤attentivelywhentheyaretalking.Secondlywecan
⑥makealistofourparentsideasthatwedisagreewithstateourreasonsandopinionsandtryto
⑦persuadethemtoacceptouropinions.Anyway
⑧aslongaswefindproperwaystocommunicatewithourparentswewill
⑨achievegoodresultsinourcommunicationwiththem.
①for因为,这是个并列连词.
②getalongwellwith与……相处得很好.
③finditdifficulttocommunicate...it充当形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式.
④respect尊重.
⑤attentively用心地;专注地.
⑥makealistof歹U举.
⑦persuadesb.todosth.劝说某人做某事.
⑧aslongas引导条件状语从句意思是只要
⑨achievegoodresults取得良好的效果.亮点点评.文章段落分明,逻辑清晰.首段提出问题第二段论述解决问题的路径,尾段总结.2用howeverfirstlysecondlyanyway等衔接语使段落之间、句与句之间衔接更紧密..文中除了运用状语从句、定语从句外,还用for连接并列句,用it充当形式宾语指代动词不定式这些句式为文章增色..文中用词考究,如用getalongwellwithfinditdifficulttodosth.effectivelyrespectattentivelymakealistofdisagreewithpersuadeaslongasproperachievegoodresults等为文章添彩.素材宝库.好词妙语behonestwithothers真诚对待别人properwaystosolvetheproblem解决问题的恰当方式makeconcertedefforts齐心协力shareyourhappinesswithyourfriends和你的朋友分享快乐listentootherspatiently耐心听另U人讲drawalessonfromyourmistakes从你的错误中吸取教训beartheresponsibilityfor…为负责getalongwellwith...与….••相处得很好finditdifficulttocommunicatewithsb.发现与某人交流很困难achievegoodresults取得良好的效果.提分佳句AstheoldsayingrunsLaughteristhebestmedicine.”俗话说,“笑是最好的药Youmustbehonestwithothersandnevertellliestoyourfriends.你要真诚地对待别人,并且永远不要对你的朋友说谎.Theobjectiveconditionscannotbechanged.Wecanonlychangeourselves.客观环境改变不了我们只能改变自己.Ithinkifwemakeconcertedeffortswewillwin.我认为如果我们齐心协力我们就会赢.Apersonsinternalbeautyinsteadofhisorherappearanceisalwaysthemostvaluablepart.一个人的内在美,而非其外表,总是最有价值的部分.Everyoneshouldtryhardtoplayhisownpartnomatterhowsmallthepartis.每个人都应该努力扮演好自己的角色,无论这个角色多么小.Itisnecessarytoshareyourhappinesswithyourfriendsbecauseitcanhelpyougetclosertothem.和你们的朋友分享快乐是很有必要的因为这可帮助你们更加接近他们.Youshouldhelpyourfriendswhentheyareintrouble;forexampleyoucanhelpthemwiththeirstudiesorgivethemawarmhug.当你的朋友身处困境时你应该帮助他们,比如你可在学习方面帮助他们或者给他们一个温暖的拥抱.Althoughsometimesyoumayhaveadifferentopinionyoushouldlistentootherspatientlyfirst.尽管有时候你可能会有不同的观点,但你首先应耐心倾听别人所讲.IamnotstrongenoughtochangethesituationbutIhavetheabilitytochangemythoughts.我不够强壮无法改变处境,但我有能力改变自己的想法.Winningorlosingisonlyhalfthegame;theotherhalfislearninghowtocommunicatewithyourteammatesanddrawingalessonfromyourmistakes.输赢只是比赛的一半,另一半是学习如何与你的队友沟通从错误中吸取教训.Dontmakeapromiseeasilyunlessyouhavetheabilitytobeartheresponsibilityforyourwords.除非你有能力为自己的话负责,否则不要轻易做出承诺.写作预热句式变换Trytoconsiderthingsinothersstand.(用sothat引导的目的状语从句扩写句子)Itishardformetogetalongwellwithothers.(改为Ifindthat后接宾语从句或Ifindit后接动词不定式)Icannotsolvetheproblembymyself.(用havetroublein改写句子)AtschoolIdidnotknowhowtostartatopicwithmyfriends.(用when引导的时间状语从句改写句子)Theparentsareworkinghardforabetterfutureandsoaretheirchildren.(用both...and改成[司义句)6)Whatmattersmostistobeanhonestman.Whatmattersmostishowtocommunicatewithothers.(按照这两个例句分别仿写句子)
(1)⑵7)良好的沟通在家庭中起着重要的作用,因为家庭成员可通过它很好地理解彼此.(根据中文提示翻译句子)Goodcommunicationinafamilybecausethefamilymemberscanwellthroughit.答案Trytoconsiderthingsinothersstandsothatwecanunderstandothersbetter.开放性答案Ifindthatitishardformetogetalongwellwithothers./1findithardformetogetalongwellwithothers.Ihavetroubleinsolvingtheproblembymyself.WhenIwasatschoolIdidnotknowhowtostartatopicwithmyfriends.Boththeparentsandtheirchildrenareworkinghardforabetterfuture.61Whatmattersmostistobeaconfidentperson.开放性答案⑵Whatmattersmostishowtogetalongwellwithothers」开放性答案playsanimportantrole;understandeachother实战练笔.随着科技的发展,人与人之间的沟通方式发生了很大变化.有人喜欢面对面沟通,有人选择WeChat等非面对面的沟通方式.你的选择及理由是什么请你自拟标题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文.选择面对面沟通理由直接有效可拉近距离;.选择非面对面沟通,理由方便随时随地可以沟通;.你的选择.范文ThewaystocommunicatewithothersWiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologythewaysofcommunicationbetweenpeoplehavegreatlychanged.Somepeopleliketocommunicatefacetofacebecausetheythinkitismoredirectandmoreeffectiveandhelpsshortenthedistancebetweenpeople.OthershoweverpreferonlinecommunicationsuchascommunicationbyemailandWeChat.Theybelievethatthishelpsthemcommunicateconvenientlywitheachotheranytimeandanywhere.AsformeIpreferface-to-facecommunication.Ononehanditprovidesimmediatefeedbackandhelps1meunderstandothersbetterandavoidmisunderstanding.Ontheotherhanditcanimprovetherelationshipwithothers.II.请根据下列写作要点并结合自己的经历,以Theteacher-studentrelationship为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己对师生关系的看法.写作要点.良好的师生关系有益处;.不良的师生关系导致某些后果;.我的看法.范文Theteacher-studentrelationshipNodoubtagoodteacher-studentrelationshipisnecessaryandimportantinourschoollife.AsfarasIamconcernedagoodrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentshelpsmaketeachingandlearninglivelyinterestingandeffectivewhileabadrelationshipbetweenthemdiscouragesstudentsfromactivelearningandevenmakesthemholdanegativeattitudetowardslearning.Thereforeweneedtotryourbesttoestablishaharmoniousteacher-studentrelationshipbycommunicatingwitheachotherfrequentlyandeffectivelyandshowingrespecttoeachother.。