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主题健康与安全导读本综合训练的主题是健康与安全.当前,党和政府高度重视人民的健康安全,多次强调保障食品、药品安全等的重要性.因此,健康与安全属于热点和长效性话题,这方面的英语写作通常涉及以下角度从校园、交通、家庭、网络等方面谈论中学生在日常生活中如何保证自身安全;谈论健康的重要性及如何保持健康;谈论用眼卫生及保护视力等.题目回放一健康和安全是我们成长的基石也是我们学习的保障.你所在的学校正在开展关于“美丽校园,健康生活”的活动.请你自拟标题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你对保护校园环境的建议.写作要求.文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名;.词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁说明文.2审内容首先点出保护校园环境的重要性以引出主题然后说明如何保护校园环境,最后呼应主题.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头开篇点题简单阐明保护校园环境的重要性.中间说明应该怎么做才能保护校园环境.结尾总结,呼应主题.段落素描Firstparagraph:Mostschoolchildrenhopetohaveahealthyschoolenvironmentwhichoffers......Thebody:Tocreateagoodschoolenvironmentwemust...Besideswearesupposedto...Mostimportantlyweneedto......Lastparagraph:Ifwecandothesewellwewill......范本淬炼MaintainingagoodschoolenvironmentMostschoolchildrenhopetohaveahealthyschoolenvironment@whichoffersacomfortableplacefortheirstudiesandschoollife.
②Tocreateagoodschoolenvironmentwemustsetstrictschoolrulessothatnoonecan
③destroytheschoolenvironment.Besideswearesupposedtokeepourschoolcleananddonotallowanyoneto
④litterorspit.Mostimportantlyweneedtoplantmoretreesandflowerswhichwillcreatefresherairandmakeourschoolmorebeautiful.Ifwecandothesewellwewill
⑤maintainaharmoniousschoolenvironmentandenjoyahappyandhealthyschoollife.
①which引导非限制性定语从句;offer提供.
②tocreate…动词不定式表目的.
③destroy破坏.
④litterorspit乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰.
⑤maintainaharmoniousschoolenvironment维护和谐的学校环境.亮点点评L开篇点明主题,中间主体段落阐述为创设良好的校园环境必须做的事,尾段再次照应主题.全文紧扣主题,首尾呼应,条理清晰..中间主体段落用besidesmostimportantly等衔接语,使文章连贯通顺..文中使用含定语从句、状语从句的主从复合句,丰富了文章句式..文中运用offercreatedestroyharmonious等丰富词汇给文章添彩.题目回放二为提醒广大青少年重视保护视力某英语报正在开展以Savingoureyesight为题的征文活动.请根据以下写作提示写一篇英语短文用于投稿,说明造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议.写作提示readinwrongplacesspendtoomuchtimedoingthehomeworkorusingelectronicproducts写作要求.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;.写作提示必须全部用上,并作适当发挥;.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名;.90词左右.审题指引1审体裁说明文.2审内容说明造成中学生近视的原因,然后提出保护视力的建议.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.框架设计开头从学生的视力健康问题出发,引出主题.中间从不同角度描述导致学生近视的主要原因.结尾提出保护视力的建议.段落素描.Firstparagraph:Accordingtoareportover50%ofthestudents...haveapooreyesight.....Thebody:Thestudents*badeyesightismainlyduetotheunhealthyhabitsofusingtheireyes.Firstofall...Second.......Lastparagraph:Toprotectoureyesweshouldlearnhowtouseoureyescorrectly.Firstwemust...Moreimportantlyweneed......范本淬炼Savingoureyesight
①Accordingtoareportover50%ofthestudentsfromhighschoolsand
②highereducationinstitutionshaveapooreyesight.Thestudents*badeyesightismainly
③duetotheunhealthyhabitsofusingtheireyes.Firstofallmanyofthemreadinwrongplaces@suchasonthebedonthebusandinbrightsunlight.Secondalargenumberofstudents
⑤spendtoomuchtimedoingtheirhomeworkorusingelectronicproductsbutlittletimetakingexerciseordoingoutdooractivities.
⑥Toprotectoureyesweshouldlearnhowtouseoureyescorrectly.Firstwemustreadinarightplace.
⑦Moreimportantlyweneedtospendmoretimetakingexerciseordoingoutdooractivitiesafterschoolandspend
⑧lesstimeusingmobilephonescomputersandotherelectronicproducts.accordingto根据.highereducationinstitutions高等教育机构.
③dueto由于.
④suchas比如.
⑤spendtoomuchtimedoingsth.花费太多时间做某事.
⑥toprotect…是动词不定式,表目的.
⑦moreimportantly更重要的是.
⑧lesstime更少的时间.亮点点评L文章设计了三个段落,结构清晰,层次分明首段简述学生视力存在的问题,第二段叙述原因,尾段提出建议..文中使用了dueto充当表语spendtimedoingsth.结构以及动词不定式充当目的状语等句式,使文章读起来很顺畅..文中使用了accordingtofirstofallsecondbutmoreimportantly等用语,使句子和段落衔接自然..遣词造句准确,如列举原因时用mainly一词,使陈述较为客观;用spendtoomuchtime...butlitletime...进行对比,逻辑严密.素材宝库.好词妙语stayup熬夜putonweight增肥loseweight减月巴foodsafety食品安全beshortofexercise缺乏锻炼keephealthy保持健康keepawayfrom远离protectoneself保护自己awasteoftime浪费时间keepabalanceddiet保持均衡饮食paymoreattentionto...更力□关注・・・・・・haveabadinfluenceon..对・・・・・・有不良影响developagoodhabitof…养成一个・•・…的好习惯.提分佳句Lifeissovaluablethatweshouldtakeitseriously.生命如此宝贵,我们应当认真对待它.Healthcomesfirstonthewaytosuccessandyoushouldpaymoreattentiontoit.在通往成功的道路上,健康是第一位的,你应该多关注它.Weallknowthatitisveryimportanttokeephealthy.Withoutiteverythingismeaningless.我们都知道,保持健康非常重要.没有健康一切都是无意义的.Healthyfoodcangiveusenergyandhelpusbuildupourbody.健康食物能给我们提供能量,帮助我们强健体格.Astimegoesbysportsareplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleinpeopleslife.随着时间的推移,运动在人们生活中的作用越来越重要.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthywealthyandwise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明.FollowingthesewaysIwillsurelybeabletoprotectmyselffrombeinghurt.遵照这些方法,我定将能保护自己免受伤害.Weshouldnotacceptthethingsgivenbystrangers.我们不应该接受陌生人给的东西.Lastbutnotleastwhenweareindangerweshouldaskadultsforhelpatonce.最后但并非最不重要的一点是,当我们身处险境时,我们应该立即向大人求助.写作预热.句式变换Coveryourmouthandnosewithawetcloth.Thenyoucanescapefromthefirewithouttakingintoomuchsmoke.(用sothat引导目的状语从句)Youshouldkeepthebathroomfloordryoryoumayfalldown.(用prevent...from和动词不定式改写句子)Wecancallthepoliceforhelpwhenweareindangerathomealone.(使用Ithink和宾语从句改写句子)Topusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschoolisdangerous.(用it作形式主语)Weshouldwaituntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.Wecrossthestreets.(用whenever改写句子)Keepawayfrombuildingswhenanearthquakehappens.Partsofabuildingmayfalldownonyou.(用because弓I导从句改写句子)Weobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoout.Itisnecessary.用it充当形式主语合并句子Weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends.fflbesupposedto改写句子play改为playshave改为havea实战练笔.暑假即将开始,为使学生过一个安全、充实、快乐的暑假,学校制定了暑期安全规则,主要内容如下:.家庭安全小心用火用电;.游泳安全不要独自外出游泳;.交通安全过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍.请你根据以上提示,自拟标题,写一篇英语短文.写作要求.请不要逐句翻译可适当发挥;.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名.做法.答案1Coveryourmouthandnosewithawetclothsothatyoucanescapefromthefirewithouttakingintoomuchsmoke.2Youshouldkeepthebathroomfloordrytopreventyourselffromfallingdown.31thinkwecancallthepoliceforhelpwhenweareindangerathomealone.4Iisdangeroustopusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.5Wheneverwecrossthestreetsweshouldwaituntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.6Keepawayfrombuildingswhenanearthquakehappensbecausepartsofabuildingmayfalldownonyou.7Itisnecessaryforustoobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoout.8Wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenwemakefriends.
2.短文改错Asthesayinggo/***45678Eyesarewindowstothesoul.Without1eyesnothingisleftbesideyoubutdarkness.HereIwouldliketosharemywaystoprotecttheeyesight.IusuallytakeabreakwhenIkeepmyeyesworkingfor2alongtime.Ioftentakeexerciseorwatchgreenplantsduringthebreak.InmyfreetimeItrytospendaslittletimeaspossibletouseelectronicproductsbecausethelightthey3giveoffisharmfulformyeyes.Besidesdoingeyeexercises4playanimportantroleintheprotectionofmytiredeyes.5Inawordaslongaswehavegoodhabitofprotecting6oureyeswewillhaveagoodeyesight.答案lgo改为goes2keep改为havekept3touse改为using4for改为to范文SafetyrulesforthesummerholidayToensurethatwewillspendasafesummerholidayourschoolhassetsafetyrulesforustofollow.Firstlywearesupposedtousefireandelectricitycarefully.Whenwestopusingthemdonotforgettoturnofftheswitches.Secondlywearenotallowedtoswimaloneinariveroralake.Thirdlywemuststrictlyfollowtrafficruleswhenwecrossthestreetsandneverplayonthestreets.Ifwefollowtheseruleswewillhaveasafeandhappysummerholiday.n.近年来学生安全事故频发,如交通安全事故、火灾事故、校园霸凌、溺水事故、食物中毒等,它们已变成十分严重的社会问题.请以Safetyfirst为题,结合自己的日常学习和生活介绍两三种保护自身安全的原则或范文SafetyfirstItisimportantforusstudentstobecarefulwhenwemeetwithsomethingdangerous.Herearesomesafetyrules.Firstwemustobeytrafficrulesandremembertowatchthetrafficlightswhilecrossingtheroads.Secondwhenafirebreaksouttherightthingweshoulddoistocoverourmouthsandnoseswithwetclothesortowelstokeepusawayfromthesmoke.Thirdwhenwemeetwithschoolbullyingwemustdealwithitwiselyandtimelytellourteachersorparentswhathashappened.Inawordwearesupposedtostrictlyfollowsafetyrulestokeepussafe.。