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主题传统节日导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论我国的传统节日,这是传统文化的重要表现形式.通过学习本单元内容,同学们可提炼恰当的英语句式,学会用它们介绍传统节日和庆祝方式.可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如ThetraditionalChinesefestivalsTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheSpringFestival等.题目回放我国历史悠久,拥有灿烂的文化.近年来我国传统文化越来越受到世界各国关注鉴于此,你校拟举办中国传统节日一中秋节的英语征文比赛.请你以TheMid-AutumnFestival为题按下列要求介绍该节日.写作要求.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息;3词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁介绍节日习俗,属于说明文.2审内容从时间、寓意、饮食及习俗等几个方面介绍.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第三人称为主.框架设计开头由中国文化谈到中秋节.中间从时间、寓意、饮食等方面介绍中秋节.结尾简单谈谈对中秋节的感受.段落素描Firstparagraph:...TraditionalfestivalsinChinaplayanimportantrole...AmongthemtheMid-AutumnFestival......Thebody:...iscelebratedonwhenpeople...Besides......Lastparagraph:...makesus...Ienjoy......范本淬炼ATheMid-AutumnFestivalTherearemany
①traditionalfestivalsinChina.AmongthemtheMid-AutumnFestivalisveryimportant.TheMid-AutumnFestival
②iscelebratedonthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonth.Itisatimeforfamilymemberstogettogether.Theyeatmooncakes@shapedlikethefullmoonduringthatnight.Theygivethebestwishestotheirrelatives
④whotheyloveandmiss.Besidestheysharedifferentkindsoffruitandstaytogethertowatchthemoonduringthatnight.IlovetheMid-AutumnFestival.It
⑤makesmerelaxedduringtheholidayandfeelthewarmthofmyfamily.
①traditionalfestival传统节日.
2...iscelebrated是被动语态.
③shapedlikethefullmoonduringthatnight形状像那天晚上的满月.@who引导定语从句.
⑤makemerelaxed让我放松.亮点点评.该篇作文能够紧扣主题,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段点题,中间段落从节日的时间、饮食等方面用向人们完整展示了中秋节,第三段总结并谈感受..therebe结构、被动语态、定语从句等句式,运用准确..用语较为丰富,使用了celebratelunarmonthshapedlikerelativefeelthewarmth等,为文章添彩.一类文TheMid-AutumnFestivalAsanimportantpartofChineseculturetraditionalfestivals
①playasignificantroleinChina;amongthemtheMid-AutumnFestivalisnodoubtworthmentioning.TheChinesepeoplecelebratetheMid-AutumnFestivalonthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonth
②whenfamilymembersgettogethertoenjoyaspecialkindoffoodknownasmooncakesshapedlikethefullmoonduringthatnight.3Aftereatingmooncakestheyusuallywatchthefullmoontogetherwhilesharingdifferentkindsoffruit.
④Moreovertheyconveytheirwishestotheirrelativesorfriendswhotheyloveandmiss.IliketheMid-AutumnFestival@whenIcanhaveagoodrestandenjoythewarmthofthefamily.playasignificantrole发挥重要作用.
②when引导非限制性定语从句.
③aftereating…充当时间状语,简洁明了.
④moreover止匕外.
⑤when引导非限制性定语从句.亮点点评.文章紧扣主题,要点齐全,内容完整“三段式”段落清晰,主要段落集中说明主题从节日的时间、饮食和习俗等方面向人们完整介绍了中秋节..文章用词丰富使用了significantcelebratelunarmonthgettogetherknownasshapedlikedifferentkindsoffruit等亮眼”词语..文章句式多样使用了非限制性定语从句、过去分词充当后置定语、现在分词充当伴随状语等彰显了作者较强的语言表达能力.佳作赏析MyfavoritefestivalAMyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival
①whichiscelebratedonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonth.OntheeveoftheSpringFestivaltheChinesepeoplealways
②setofffireworksexpectingtodriveawaybadluck.Themostimportantthingtodois
③thatallfamilymembersgettogethertohaveagranddinnerandeatdumplingsinparticular.Besidesmostpeoplevisittheir
④relativesandfriends.Youngchildrenusuallygetluckymoneyfromeldergenerations.IenjoytheSpringFestivalwhentheactivitiesare
⑤attractive.MoreoverIcanhavemuchtimetorelaxmyselfanddothethingsthatIlike.
①which引导非限制性定语从句.setofffireworks燃放鞭炮.
③that引导表语从句.
④relativesandfriends亲友.
⑤attractive吸引人的.亮点点评.本文描写了作者最喜爱的传统节日一春节.整篇作文围绕春节这个主题采用分段式展开.第一段介绍节日发生的时间第二段描写节日活动尾段表达对节日的喜爱之情.整体框架布局合理,思路清晰..文中句式丰富多变,运用了定语从句、表语从句等亮点句式.此外,还自如地运用了被动语态、现在分词充当伴随状语等句式,提升了文章档次..文中用词丰富,尤其灵活运用了多种短语,如setoffdriveawayinparticular等.TheSpringFestivalTherearemanyimportantfestivalsinChina
①suchastheSpringFestivaltheDragonBoatFestivalandtheMid-AutumnFestival.NowIamgladtotellyouabouttheSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivaliscelebratedonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonthusuallyinJanuaryorFebruaryandlastsuntiltheLanternFestival.AfewdaysbeforetheSpringFestivalChinesefamiliesare
②busygettingreadyforit.TheChinesepeoplecleantheirhouses
③expectingtodriveawaybadluck.BesidestheymakelanternsandsetofffireworkstowelcomethelunarNewYear.Whatismoretheybuynewclothesindicatinganewstart.MoreovertheyhaveatraditionalfamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEve
④withdumplingsbeingthespecialtraditionalfood.IliketheSpringFestivalverymuch
⑤forIlovealltheactivitiesaboutitandIhavemuchtimetoenjoymyself.
①suchas比如用它引出后列内容.
②busygettingready.for...,忙于准备・・・・・・
③expectingtodriveawaybadluck现在分词短语充当伴随状语.
④withdumplingsbeing..是独立主格结构.
⑤for因为,这是个并列连词.亮点点评L本文较为详细地描写了中国的传统节日一春节段落安排合理,逻辑性强.文章第一段引入主题第二段描述庆祝春节的时间和各种活动,第三段描写作者对春节的感受..文中恰当运用了衔接词,如besideswhatismoremoreover等,使文章衔接自然..文中用语丰富如使用Tcelebratelunarmonthuntilexpectdriveawaysetofffireworksindicate等,增强了文章的感染力.CTheDragonBoatFestivalInChinatherearemanytraditionalfestivals.
①AmongthemtheDragonBoatFestivalisimpressive.TheDragonBoatFestival
②whichfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthlunarmonthmeansalottotheChinesepeoplebecauseitis
③notonlyafestivalbutalsoaspecialdayforthemtoshowrespecttoafamousancientChinesepoet
④namedQuYuan.Duringthatdaytheywearperfumedmedicinebagsracedragonboatsandeattraditionalfoodzongziapyramid-shapeddumplingmadeof
⑤glutinousricewrappedinbambooorreedleaves.IliketheDragonBoatFestivalwhenIcandomanyactivitiesand
⑥haveagoodunderstandingofpartoftraditionalChineseculture.
①among在……(三者或以上)当中.
②which引导非限制性定语从句.
③用notonly...butalso加强语气.
④named过去分词充当后置定语.glutinousrice糯米.haveagoodunderstandingof很好地理解•…亮点点评.文章描述了中国的传统节日一一端午节,介绍了节日的时间、活动、特别食物等,思路清晰,布局合理层次分明..文章灵活运用了多种句式,如定语从句、状语从句,以及同位语等..文章用语丰富使用了impressivefallonmerelyshowrespecttoperfumedmedicinebagraceaboatpyramid-shapedglutinousricewrappedin等增强了文章的可读性.素材宝库.好词妙语traditionally从传统上来说thestartofanewyear新的一年的开始playasignificantrole发挥重要作用nomatter无论bebusygettingreadyfor...忙于准备・・・・.celebratethefestivalwiththefamily与家人共度节日thefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonth农历正月的第一天traditionalChinesefestival中国传统节日realizetheimportanceof…意识到的重要性awonderfultimetogettogetherwithfamilymembers与家人团聚的美好时刻shapedlikethefullmoon形状像满月.提分佳句TraditionallytheSpringFestivalmeansthestartofanewyear.从传统上来说,春节意味着新的一年的开始.Thehappiestthingforchildrenisthattheycangetplentyofgifts.对孩子们来说,最幸福的事情就是他们能得到许多礼物.Nomatterwheretheyarepeoplecomehometocelebratethefestivalwiththeirfamilies.无论身处何方,人们都要回家和家人共度佳节.TheSpringFestivalfallsonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonthandlastsfortwoweeks.春节在农历正月的第一天来临并且持续两周的时间.TraditionalChinesefestivalscannotonlybringpeoplemuchfunbutalsomakethemrealizetheimportanceofthehomeandthefamily.中国传统节日不仅仅能带给人们很多乐趣,还能使他们意识到家庭和亲人的重要性.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisenjoyedbyusbecauseitisawonderfultimetogettogetherwithfamilymembers.中秋节之所以受到我们的喜爱,是因为这是一个家人团聚的美好时刻.写作预热句式变换Peoplearefarawayfromtheirhometownandtheywillgohometocelebratethefestival.用Nomatterhow...改写句子Wehavekeptthetraditionforthousandsofyears.ItisourChinesetradition.改写成含定语从句的复合句Nomatterwheretheyarepeoplewillgohomeforaget-together.仿写句子Afterthispeoplestartthetraditionofwatchingthefullmoonandsharingmooncakeswiththeirfamilies.仿写句子Peoplewholiveanywheregohometocelebratethefestivalwiththeirfamilies.用wherever弓I导的状语从句改写句子答案Nomatterhowfarpeopleareawayfromtheirhometowntheywillgohometocelebratethefestival.ItisourChinesetraditionwhichwehavekeptforthousandsofyears.Nomatterhowfartheylivepeoplewillgohomewithgiftstovisittheirparentsshowingtheirlovetothem.Afterthispeoplestartthetraditionofeatingzongziandhavingdragonboatraces.Wherevertheylivepeoplegohometocelebratethefestivalwiththeirfamilies.实战练笔年夜饭是中国传统文化中最重要的团圆饭,其菜肴丰富美味,并带有美好的祝愿.请以ThefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEve为题向英文杂志投稿介绍自己家乡的年夜饭,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多彩的文化习俗.写作要点.年夜饭的意义;年夜饭的食物及其寓意.写作要求.文中不可出现你的真实姓名和校名;标题已经给出,不计入总词数;.词数90左右.范文ThefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEveThefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEveisviewedasthemostimportantdinnerintraditionalChineseculture.DuringthatnightmostChinesepeoplegohomeinalldirectionstoenjoythedinnertogetherwiththeirfamilymembers.Forthisgranddinnerallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinksarewellprepared.Whatismoremanyofthemusuallyhavespecialmeanings.ForexamplethetraditionalChinesefoodjiaozioftenmeansthereunionoffamilymemberswhogettogetherandsharethespecialfoodwitheachotherinpeaceandharmony.WelcometoChinatotastethefamilydinnerontheSpringFestivalEve.Youwillhaveadifferentexperience.。