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主题介绍人物导读本综合训练的主题是介绍人物.这是同学们所熟悉的日常话题,常有以下英语写作命题形式介绍自己可以用于演讲等场合;介绍他人如家庭成员、老师、朋友、同学或心目中的英雄等并表达感恩、喜爱或敬佩之情等.题目回放一同学们都知道,老师在我们的学习生涯中扮演着不可或缺的角色.请以Myfavoriteteacher为题用英语写一篇短文根据要点进行描述.写作要点.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike.Whydoyoulikehim/her.词数90左右;可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容使行文连贯;.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.审题指引1审体裁」写人的作文属于记叙文.2审内容介绍自己最喜爱的一位老师,表达对老师的喜爱及感激之情.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第三人称为主.框架设计开头介绍自己最喜爱的老师,引出主题.中间着重说明为什么最喜欢这位老师.结尾表达感激和难忘之情.段落素描Firstparagraph:Thereareanumberofteachersinmylifebutwhatimpressesmemostis.......Thebody:Tusedto...MyEnglishteacher...ThankstoherhelpI.......Lastparagraph:IamluckytohavesuchaniceteacherandIwillloveherforever.IoftenthinkaboutmyEnglishteacherwhoencouragedmeandhelpedmealotinmystudies....范本淬炼MyfavoriteteacherThereareanumberofteachers
①whohaveleftmedeepimpressions.HowevermyEnglishteacherismyfavorite.Iusedtoshownoconfidenceand
②neverdaredtoraisemyhandtoanswerquestionsinclass.MyEnglishteacherwaskindtoand
③patientwithme.SheoftenencouragedmeespeciallywhenIwasintrouble.ThankstoherhelpandencouragementIhavebecomemoreconfidentand
④amwillingtoexpressmyideasinclass.Iamveryluckytohavesuchaniceteacher.Iwillrememberher
⑤forever.
①who引导定语从句.
②neverdaretodosth.从来不敢做某事.
③bepatientwithsb.,对某人有耐心.
④bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事
⑤forever永远.亮点点评.文章段落设计合理,层次分明.开篇点题介绍作者最喜爱的老师,中间主体段落集中说明喜爱老师的原因结尾再次扣题并表达自己的情感..文章长短句错落有致,尤其是采用定语从句和状语从句等句式,体现了作者的语言驾驭能力..词汇、短语丰富,如使用usedtoshownoconfidencedaretodosth.bepatientwithbeintroublethankstobewillingtodosth.express等为文章增色.题目回放二你校的校刊向全校学生征集英语稿件.请以“感恩”为主题,用Thankyoumy…作为题目,写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你最感恩的人并说明原因.审题指引1审体裁本文是一篇写人的作文属于记叙文.2审内容描述自己要感恩的人,比如自己的妈妈,说明为何感恩.3审时态以一般现在时为主.4审人称以第一人称为主.框架设计开头点题,说明“我”对妈妈的感恩之情.中间主体段落记述妈妈为“我”做的令“我”感激的事情.结尾再次表达“我”的感激之情.段落素描Firstparagraph:Nomatterwherewearewewillbearinmindthosewhohelpedusand...Inmymindmymotheris......Thebody:Mymothertakesgoodcareofmeeveryday.WheneverIamintroubleshe......Lastparagraph:Imustthankmymotherforhercareofme.Iwill...范本淬炼ThankyoumymotherNomatterwherewearewewillbearinmindthosewhohelpedusandneverforgettheirkindness.InmymindmymotherisoneofthosetowhomImust
②expressmyheartfeltgratitude.Mymothertakesgoodcareofmeeveryday.
③WheneverIamintroublesheisalwaysthefirsttocomfortencourageandhelpme.Thisgivesmemuch
④confidenceandhelpsmegetoutoftrouble.Imustthankmymotherforhercareofme.Iwill
⑤sparemytimetohelpherwiththehouseworksothatshecanhavearest.BesidesIwillworkharderatschoolandtryto
⑥makegreaterprogressinmystudies.
①nomatterwhereweare无论我们在哪里.expressmyheartfeltgratitude表达我衷心的感谢.
③whenever每当.
④confidence信」心
⑤sparesb.stimetodosth.腾出某人的时间做某事.
⑥makegreaterprogressinsth.在某方面取得更大进步.亮点点评L文章紧扣主题,首段点题说明感恩母亲,第二段叙述母亲对作者的关爱尾段总结并表达感恩和回馈.文章布局合理,层次分明..灵活运用状语从句、定语从句等句式,避免句式单一..文章衔接自然,使用nomatter...inmymindbesides等衔接语,有效连接段落和句子..文中运用了丰富、精准的短语,如nomatterwherebear...inmindheartfeltgratitudecomforthelpsb.getoutoftroublesparesb.*stimetodosth.等增强了文章的可读性.素材宝库.好词妙语tothebestofmyknowledge据我所知playavitalrolein…在中扮演重要角色touchsb.*sheart触动某人的心扉aslongas只要sharejoysandsorrows同甘共苦atthebeginningof...在之初developagoodrelationshipwith..・与•・・・・建立良好关系bearinmindthosewhohelpedus记住那些帮助我们的人expressmyheartfeltgratitude表达我衷心的感谢.提分佳句Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情.AsfarasIamconcernedanexamplemeanspoweranddirections.就我而言,榜样意味着力量和方向.Sheplayedanimportantroleinmygrowthandlitupmywaytosuccess.她在我的成长中扮演着重要的角色,照亮了我的成功之路.Atruefriendgivesyouahandandtouchesyourheart.真正的朋友对你施以援手并触动你的心扉.Friendsarelikebooks-Youdonotneedmanyofthemaslongastheyaregood.朋友如书,贵在好而不在多.Atruefriendnotonlysharesyourjoyandhappinessbutalsosharesyourdifficultiesandworries.真正的朋友不仅分享你的欢乐与幸福而且分担你的困难与忧愁.Honestyisthemostbeautifulgiftthatapersoncangivetoanotheratthebeginningoffriendship.诚实是一个人在友谊之初能给对方的一个最漂亮的礼物.Oneofthesecretsofbeinghappyistotrytodevelopagoodrelationshipwiththosearoundyou.快乐的秘诀之一是努力与你周围的人建立良好的关系.写作预热句式变换Ihaveafriend.HisnameisAndy.(合并成一个含定语短语或定语从句的句子)Ihavetofacechallenges.Myfriendwillsupportme.(改写成一个含whenever引导的从句的复合句)Iamthankfultothosewhohelpedmeinmylife.Iamespeciallythankfultomymother.(用especially合并句子)Ihaveevermetmanyunforgettableteachers.ThemostunforgettableoneismymiddleschoolEnglishteacher」合并成一个含定语从句的复合句)Tomisverybravetofaceallthechallenges.
①用enoughtodo转换句子;
②用so...that.・.转换句子
①②答案IhaveafriendwhosenameisAndy./IhaveafriendwiththenameofAndy.WheneverIhavetofacechallengesmyfriendswillsupportme.Iamthankfultothosewhohelpedmeinmylifeespeciallymymother.ThemostunforgettableteacherIhaveevermetismymiddleschoolEnglishteacher.5
①Tomisbraveenoughtofaceallthechallenges.
②Tomissobravethathecanfaceallthechallenges.实战练笔L每个人的生活都离不开家庭.请以Myfamily为题写一篇英语作文介绍自己的家庭.范文MyfamilyMynameisDaMing.IamfromaChinesefamilywithsixpeople.Everymemberofmyfamilyisbusyworkinghardeveryday.Mygrandparentsworkonafarminmyhometown.MyfatheranengineerinNorthwestChinaishelpingtobuildapowerstation.MymotherworksasanEnglishteacher.MybrotherwhoisfiveyearsolderthanmestudiesinoneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.IamajuniorhighschoolstudentandIamtryingmybesttoachievemydreamofstudyinginatopuniversity.Thisismyfamily.Welivehappilyandloveeachother.IL我们心目中的英雄,可能是人人敬佩的名人,也可能是我们身边的亲人或朋友.请以Aheroinmyheart为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文.范文AheroinmyheartEveryonehasaheroinhisorherheart.AsfarasIamconcernedmyfatheristheheroinmyheart.MyfatherwhoisabraveandstrongmanalwaysencouragesmewhenIamintrouble.WheneverImeetwithdifficultiesinmystudiesmyfatherwillalwaysencouragemetofacethembravely.WithhishelpandencouragementThavelearnedtodealwiththeminapositiveattitudeandfindwaystoovercomethem.ThankstomyfatherIhavemaderapidprogressinmystudies.Indeedheisaheroinmyheart.。