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高考英语应用文写作指导(感谢信)[写作模板]写信目的一事情经过f再表谢意III【经典考题】假定你是李华最近,你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习学习期间,你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊请根据下面的写作提纲,给Mr.Wilson发一封电子邮件内容包括.表示感谢;.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助;.邀请他来中国游览注意
1.词数100左右;.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯[满分范文]DearMr.Wilson
①Howiseverythinggoing
②Ivebeenbackhomenow.
③I5mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourkindness.
④WhilelwasinEnglandyourhelpandkindnessmademystayspecialandenjoyable.§HowImissthedayswespenttogether!
⑥toyourhelpIgotusedtothelifestyletheresoon.
⑦Istillmissthedeliciousmealsyoupreparedforme.
⑧BesidesIreallyappreciateyourpatiencewhileyouweretalkingwithme.
⑨BypractisingspeakingwithyoueverydayIgraduallyimprovemyspokenEnglish.⑩Ihopewecankeepintouchwithandcommunicatewitheachotherinthefuture.@ItwouldbeagreathonorformetoinviteyoutocometoChinasothatyoucanexperienceChineseculture.Bestwishes.YoursLiHua[阅卷评点]
①开篇问候,显现礼貌
③gratitude是高级词汇,体现了作者扎实的语言功底
⑤句中使用了感叹句和定语从句,大大提高了表达难度和写作档次⑩高级短语keepintouchwith和communicatewith的正确使用为文章锦上添花⑪本句中it作形式主语,sothat...引导目的状语从句,这显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力,增加了文章得分的亮点【增分佳句】.开头部分常用语1lamwritingtoexpressmythanksfor...我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意2Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyoufor...在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意3OnbehalfofmywholefamilyIwouldliketoextendmysinceregratitudefor...我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激.结尾部分常用语1Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories;wewillrememberthemforever.没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心2AgainIwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!/Thanksagainforyourkindhelp.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢3lappreciateitmorethanlcansay./Icanneverthankyouenough.感激之情,无以言表【热点押题】假定你是李华,目前正在英国做交换生你的英国朋友Debbie送了你一张苏格兰传统舞蹈一一凯利舞CeilidhDance舞会票现在,请给她写一封邮件致谢,并询问有关情况箭头所指内容introductiontothingstobringthisdanceclothesorshoestowear\TheCeilidhClubatSumEdinburghCeilidhCLSat.6Jan.20182000参考范文DearDebbielamdelightedtoreceiveyourticketfortheCeilidhDance.Ireallyfeelgratefulforyourkindnessanditwillsurelymakemyculturalexperienceheremorecolorful.HereIdliketoknowsomedetailsaboutthisdance.FirstcouldyoupleasegivemeabriefintroductiontothisdancesothatlcanknowsomethingaboutitbeforeattendingitBesidesIdliketoknowhetherlneedtobringanythinglikeabagorapresentandparticularlywhatkindofclothesandshoesTmsupposedtoweartheformalonesorthecasualonesFinallyImwonderinghowlcangetthereandavoidbeinglate.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua。