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浙江省杭州市余杭区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编话题作文2023年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试题第二节书面表达(共1小题,满分15分)假定你是李平,请阅读以下邮件并回复词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连英语试卷AnysuggestionsHeyLiPingHowseverythinggoingFmwritingbecauseinJulyFmgoingtospendafewdaysinHangzhou.PmwritingtoyoutoseeifyoucouldsuggestonespecialplaceIshouldgotowhileFmthere.IalsowanttoknowwhattheweatherwillbelikeandwhatIshouldwearatthattime.CanyouhelpmeHopetohearfromyousoon.MaryDearMaryLiPing2022年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试卷
六、电子邮件
56.假定你是张华,收到加拿大笔友Harry的来信,获悉他在废物利用制作比赛中获奖请根据邮件给他回复词数80左右HiZhangHuaHowiseverythinggoingwithyouIamgladtotellyouthatFvejustwonthefirstprizefromtheHelpSaveOurPlanetSociety!Iloverecycling.WhatdoyouthinkofrecyclingDopeopleinChinarecyclethingsCanyoushareanyexampleswithmeLookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Allthebest.YoursHarryDearHarryZhangHua2021年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试卷
九、电子邮件
71.假如你是李平E-mail:liping2002@
163.com亚运会将在你所居住的杭州举办现组委会向全市中学生发出一封邀请函招募志愿者,请阅读后进行自荐回复From:AsiaGamesOrganizingCommittee亚运会组委会DearstudentsWearenowingreatneedofvolunteersforthecomingAsianGamespleasesendusyourpersonalinformationincludingyournamegender性另JagehobbiesE-mailaddressandsoon.AlsoinordertoprovidethebestservicefortheathletesinthegameswhatkindoflanguagecanyouspeakWhatcanyoudofortheminHangzhouWewelcomeyourapplicationandlookforwardtoyoubecomingpartofourmembers!BestWishes!AsiaGamesOrganizingCommittee要求:.回复邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题,并可适当增加,使行文通顺、连贯;.回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名;.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)To:AsiaGamesOrganizingCommitteeSubject:ApplicationforavolunteerDearSir/MadamMynameisLiPing.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheAsianGamesinHangzhou.Hopeyoucanchooseme!YoursLiPing答案2023年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试题Onepossibleversion:DearMaryEverythingsfineandImgladthatyoullstayinHangzhouforseveraldaysinJuly.ButthesummerherewillbesohotthatIsuggestthatwearingadresswillbeagoodchoice.Andyoudbetterbringacapandapairofsunglasseswhenyoureoutdoors.OfcourseitwillbecoolinsidesoprobablyyoucanvisitHangzhouNationalSilkMuseumforsilkisoneofHangzhoussymbols.Hopethishelps.Haveagreattimethen!LiPing【详解】[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容[写作步骤]第一步,表达自己的喜悦心情;第二步,介绍杭州的天气,给出合理的建议[亮点词汇]
①hadbetterdosth最好做某事
②apairof一双
③haveagoodtime玩得开心[高分句型]
①EverythingsfineandImgladthatyouUstayinHangzhoufbrseveraldaysinJuly(that弓|导宾语从句)
②ButthesummerherewillbesohotthatIsuggestthatwearingadresswillbeagoodchoice(so...that引导结果状语从句)2022年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试卷
56.例文DearHarryCongratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrecyclingishelpfulinoursociety.Andinthefutureitwillplayanmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.PeopleinChinaalsorecyclethings.Wealwaysusesomeuselessplasticbottlestoplantflowers.Ifsreallybeautifulandfunny.Somepeoplewillselltheuselesstextbooksforrecycling.Bydoingthistheycannotonlygetsomemoneybutplayaroleinprotectingenvironment.Hopingyoullmakegreaterprogress.YoursZhangHua【详解】
1.题干解读本文属于应用文写作,写作时要按照邮件格式书写在写作的开头首先要祝贺他获奖;第二段介绍对废物利用的看法,以及在中国人们是怎么进行废物利用的;第三段希望他取得更大的进步
2.写作指导写作时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时;人称上以第一人称和第三人称为主文章叙述要条理清晰,语言完整,无语法和书写错误2021年浙江省杭州市余杭区中考一模英语试卷
71.例文DearSir/MadamMynameisLiPing.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheAsianGamesinHangzhou.Imagirlof
16.AsamiddlestudentIhaveakeeninterestinsportsandcanspeakEnglishfluently.SoIsupposeImqualifiedtobeavolunteerfbrtheGames.BesidesIhaveagoodcommunicativeskillandImconsideredtobeanoutgoingreliableandhelpfulpersonatschool.WhatsmoreImfamiliarwiththetraffictransportationthelocalfoodandsoon.ImsureIcanalsoofferthebestservicetotheathletesintheGamesinHangzhou.Ifyouareinterestedinmepleaseemailmeatliping2002@
163.com.Hopeyoucanchooseme!YoursLiPing【详解】
1.题干解读该题属于书信作文,作文已经给出首句,写作时注意内容的承接题目给出的写作要点有自我介绍,包括姓名、性别、年龄、爱好、电子邮件等其次是能力介绍,包括会说的语言,能为运动员做的事或提供的服务注意文章字数限制在80词左右
2.写作指导由于作文是写自荐信,所以文章时态为一般现在时,主语为第一人称写自荐信时一定要先做自我介绍,然后再写自己会什么作为亚运会的志愿者,必然会面对很多外国运动员,所以首先应该突出自己的语言优势,然后是作为杭州当地居民,对杭州非常了解,可以做个好向导……写作时可以按照以上思路适当展开作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。