外研社学术英语写作进阶教程Keys-Unit 6

Unit6IntroductionPart1PurposeofanintroductionSeethewritingtips.ContentofanIntroductionThetopicisformativeassessmentormorespecificallytheexperiencesofandattitudestowardsformativeassessmentofChineseuniversitystudentsineasternandsouthernChina.ItisimportantsincethereislittleresearchonitinEnglish.TheauthorsmainargumentisthatthistopicwithinthecontextofChinadeservesmoreattention.TheirjustificationforchoosingthetopicisthatitappearedwithineducationalpolicyinChinaatleastonedecadeago.ThepurposeofthepaperistocontributetotheknowledgeonformativeassessmentpracticesatthetertiarylevelinChina.Therearefivemainsections:IntroductionLiteratureReviewResearchMethodsFindingsandDiscussionandConclusion.3StructureofanIntroductionTopicBackground:CEBThesis:APurpose:GOrganization:HDFPart2AvoidingrepetitionSentence2:thiscausalcorrelationSentence3:Bothauthors;thesefactorsSentence4:AsimilarcaseSentence5:ThisSentence6:thissubjectSentence8:theresultsandanalyses;theinvestigationFormulatingastrongthesisAsimilarcaseismadeherebutitismaintainedthatinsomecasesandincreasinglyoverthelasttwodecadesbilateraltraderemainsstableorevenincreasesintimesofoutrightmilitaryconflictorpoliticaldiscord.Thetwofactorsinquestionarebilateraltradeandmilitaryconflict/politicaldiscord.Theirrelationshipisthatbilateraltraderemainssteadyorevengrowsduringadeteriorationinmilitaryorpoliticalrelations.Part31EvaluatinganIntroductionFurtherimprovements:Clearlystatethepurposeoftheresearch.Conciselyoutlinethepapersmainsectionsandhowtheyareorganized.2SamplerevisionDespitethepublicbecomingmoreawareofthepotentialhealthrisksposedbysomeoftheproductstheyconsumetheyremainlargelyoblivioustothedangersofsmartphoneuse.Avastarrayofproductsisnowlegallyrequiredtocarryhealthwarninglabelsinsomecountries.Oneofthemostdangerousproductscigaretteshasbeencomingwithsuchmessagessincethemid-1960sHiilamoCrosbieGlantz

2014.Thereismuchsupportinthepoliticalarenatoraiseawarenessofthehiddendangersofmobilephonesparticularlyregardingradiationexposure.Howeverlittleattentionisgiventothemanysometimesseriousaccidentssmartphonescausebydistractingtheirusers.Itisaverredherethatbasedonthedatacollectedthroughthisstudythisriskisveryrealandthatmanufacturersofsmartphonesshouldthusbelegallyobligatedtoincludemessagesthatwarnofthishazard.Thispaperaimstoshinelightonandraiseawarenessofthisissuewithinthescientificandpoliticalcommunities.Itbeginsbyreviewingtherelevantliteraturebeforepresentinganddiscussingthestudysresultsbasedonwhichitwillmakeseveralpolicyrecommendations.TopicThetopicsafetyconcernsassociatedwithsmartphoneusersbecomingdistracteddoesnotbecomeapparentuntilSentence

5.BackgroundThereisamplebackgroundinformationprovidedinSentences1-

4.Sentence5highlightstheimportanceofthetopic.ThesisThethesisisstatedinSentence6andisspecificsuitablyassertiveconciseandmakesonlyonepoint.PurposeThepurposeofthepaperisnotstated.StructureTheword“includes“inSentence7istoovague.Itisalsounnecessarytostatethatthepaperincludesaconclusion.。